Reviews for The Keepsake
S1203 chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Whoa...that was cliff. Great chapter. Thank you.
dreamzuvedward chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
I'm actually glad the cat, erhm vamp, is out of the bag. I think she should just tell him everything. He might hate her if she withholds now :/
ickaren chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
I loved the ice skating, such a great activity to be cold and still touch! It is almost impossible to not make slips in conversation... they have so much history together and she desires him so strongly. But the crescent scar is a slip she never expected. I think she might have to confess before he has to disclose his information about being dangerous. Edward knows what he is seeing, and he now knows that Bella has been exposed to vampires before.

I love this story and I am always thrilled to see an update!
katmom chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
SO sweet...

THEN the EVIL CLIFFIE QUEEN rises to her feet!


We were discussing TKC over at ADF...and we were wondering what Edward would THINK WHEN he remembers...


Trusting YOU to make this WORK!

Then you can write about evil socks...

TeamEdward246 chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Uh oh :/ I'm worried about what this will do to both of them. However I'm happy to see things are coming along :)
Cattinson chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Amaaaazing I can't wait to read more !
pnkats chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Omg what is she going to tell him about the scar James left! You had better not keep us waiting too long for this as I am already on pins and needles here! Will he believe her answer?
moniquecullen chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Oh,wow. That's just mean. Lol. But seriously,you have to put us out of our cliffy induced misery as soon as possible! I'm dying to know what in the world Bella is going to come up with to explain away a vamp bite!
Lilypad10 chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Oh no! I wish Alice would have warned her about the scar. How the hell is she going to explain this? She was bite as a child by a friend? Oh no!
weedstert chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Reading your lovely words made me feel like I was right there with them at the skating rink...amazing. I've always loved ice skating and that whole scene made me smile. The last line made me gasp!...uh oh...I'm scared for what might happen next.

Thanks for the terrific update :)
DreamOfTheEndless chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Omg! You can't leave it there! I need more! Oh no!

Awesome chapter!

Thank you, lovely:)

Twimore chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
You can't just stop there OMG. You break my heart :(

COntinue sooooooooooooooooooooooon please !

Sorry for being such a dramatic ;)
Natalia Mazaur chapter 7 . 2/5/2012


Please, for the love of God, update soon. I won't last if you don't!
TwiMom4Claire chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
I forgot about the scar, agghh. Oh I hope Edward isn't angry when everything comes out, I knew the other shoe was going to drop. It was going so well too, that ice skating scene will definitely be one of those fanfiction scenes that will stick with me. I want to ice skate with Edward, it sounded lovely.
Twiggalina chapter 7 . 2/5/2012
Oh wow,what a cliffie!

Really great story and wonderful chapter!
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