|Reviews for The Keepsake|
| FinnMac chapter 5 . 2/21
Totally dug Edward's POV.
| lesuse chapter 19 . 2/19
Oh, what a great story! I hope you're writing a doozy of a an Epilogue
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/12
This is the most romantic story I've ever read here in fanfiction. I think after this, when authors want to label their work as romance, they should read this story first. Romance doesn't mean sappy, corny, cheesy.
This is the ultimate love story. Thank you!
| ChocolateLover82 chapter 19 . 2/7
Thank you for sharing, it was a lovely story. Too bad there is only the epi left, lol.
I do wonder though, are you planning a new FF or just concentrating on you OF? Just curious. Good luck wither way.
| Puddletink chapter 19 . 2/3
A truly wonderful story, thanks for sharing it. Looking forward to the epi.
Cant wait for your next offering.
| Babette12 chapter 19 . 1/31
This is a wonderful ending to the story. I'm so glad you were able to finish it, and am really looking forward to the epi.
I think my favorite part was Kim's response to Jared's injury. So much of how we deal with situations, both good and bad, in life depends on our choices. It's when we see that that we are truly able to grow and move beyond.
Thanks again for a great story!
| ChieriAn9eL chapter 19 . 1/29
I'm so happy for them... and of course, I will miss this story... btw,,. I loved that egg roll joke from the last chapter.. haha
| brb bbe chapter 19 . 1/28
| pauleen chapter 12 . 1/27
I almost forgot that edward is really a seventeen year old at heart and a seventeen year old hormone. Wow. This edward is all male and little vampire. I'm just concerned that they didn't use any condoms. beyond her being on then pill.
I'm also impressed that you've stayed true to Breaking Dawn story line of the human/vampire hybrids. I do hope edward and bella will bea able to avoid the messy outcome of what happened last time.
| pauleen chapter 11 . 1/27
First off... This version is so well told. I am liking this new and free Edward. My take on his memory loss is that by leaving Bell, he was physiologic sacred and then was torn apart. Which made for a new Edward. That's how i rationalize this version of him. And the discussions they have acomplished in one day is well over due considering all the time they've lost. I will be reviewing on this as i go on. I'm sorry for not doing so before.
| beckysue999 chapter 12 . 1/26
"What sort of asshole had he been?
"A lucky one..."
Hee : )
| beckysue999 chapter 11 . 1/26
"Did I know you didn't want to go?"
"Edward, it doesn't matter now. It was years ago."
"Did I know?" His eyes are burning into me.
"Yes, you knew."
He watches me for a moment. His eyes harden.
It will be as if all the crap from the original story never existed : ) . This story is an entire cosmic undoing/redoing of the original, fixing everything that was troublesome or problematic.
In all of the stories I've read, especially this one, your Bella and Edward are so much more likeable and understandable, and capable of growth and change, than in the original Twilight, so it's nice to have a version with these, um, new and improved characters.
One swell story : ) .
| beckysue999 chapter 2 . 1/26
"What if it was always my scent and my uniquely silent mind that attracted him, and without those things...I'm nothing?"
Aha : ) . In one way, this is an amazing premise for a story, and in another, it's remarkable that no-one else has done this before.
I have to give my apologies - this is the third of your stories I'm reading. I raced through the other two in such a hurry for what came next, without even reviewing/commenting. I can't believe I haven't come across your writing so far - so beautifully, carefully done.
| siren of titan chapter 1 . 1/20
| Twilight-series-junkie chapter 19 . 1/19
Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's brilliant just like all the stories are the only ones I go back to when I need my twilight fix. I always want more everytine they end. Really looking forward to epilogue.