Reviews for The Keepsake
moniquecullen chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Aww! That's what I call progress. Bella is doings so good. I know it was breaking her heart each time he would Be so indifferent to her.
Shamatt0403 chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
I love this story so much. I know it is just breaking her heart but she has to realize that they are building a relationship the way it should be built. The blood doesn't sing and he can't read minds so the initial fascination is gone. thanks for posting and have a very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
linalove chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
My favorite chapter so far!Have a great Christmas and update asap please!
Rebadams7 chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
I swear if I was Bella I'd be curled up in a ball in a padded room now!

C'mon Carlisle, Alice. Something - anything? Is she just the trick or can she have a treat for Halloween ?

Pretty please

waitingontoday chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
OOOH! I can't wait for more! THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE! xxxx
twihardchick29 chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Aww that was so cute! Corny jokes aside, it was a great start of things I think. They're meant for each other! Can't wait for the next update! I really love this story!
Nonita chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Fantastic chapter! Thanks!
hotmama4jd chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Man, this story just breaks my heart! Argh. I just want to hug Edward and cry w/ Bella.
whohellanoes chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
i'm lo-lo-LOVING this. bless Bella. this most be so hard for her. but she's doing so good, being patient as ever. and poor Edward's all confused, and he hasn't a clue why. hopefully he'll find out soon. hopefully not too soon, because i'm loving this 'get to know each other again' pace. thanks so much for the update. hopefully we'll hear from you soon enough. happy holidays to you.
packermom chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
I thought for sure he would see something in Bella's apartment that would trigger a memory. He's has really changed. The joke telling is something he never would have done but like before he's drawn to her.
Manga pixie chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
This chapter made my day. I loved seeing Edward's efforts to make conversation and sitting in the rocking chair-awe. Bella's remark about her birthday disaster making her cry and Edward's efforts to comfort her was so sweet. Then his attempt to make Bella smile by telling jokes, very funny and forward to the next ch. Have a wonderful Christmas!
eveneven chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
I like the progress they made. This Edward is so different from the "old" one Bella used to know, but he still feels attracted to her and its confusing him... Have a great Christmas and update soon!
ummzarah chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Love the way this story is unfolding.
twistedkites00 chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
i was waiting for this fic update in my inbox (something very rare these days) and the chapter delivered in spades. Wonderfully written, so so sweet. Thanks
quoideneufj chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Nice. Good progress.
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