Reviews for Dungeon Crawling in Fuyuki
Nero200 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I know you said that you wouldn't be continuing, but I just want to make a guess that the next world was Familiar of Zero?
Brilliant story in any case, I think I prefer this style of your writing to your 2 HP story's, the point of view is more fun
ChaosKitsune chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
I can see this going many ways. Supernatural skills blocked, two geas, cat form, drop off in a foreighn place. Does he keep the heroic spirit ability to astralize, his skills such as hide & move silently, his braces, psycrystal, whatever that ring is. He could end up in the Naruto world- sage of Six paths (psion Ki Chakra) or the Daimyo Wife's cat (Suffer genin, suffer!), become Dead Pool from Marvel (brain rape philosopher stone regen), mentor cat in another series, etc. Your writing skills have improved. Maybe you should bind all these related stories together. Interesting read, reminded me of Dresden Files with a lot more action.
Gogolu chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
That was great chapter.
A lot better then last one.

I wonder what's next.
Deadzepplin chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
If we take this as what John does immediately after the dumbles fight then I can only imagine that the grail war is over and John just got a fuck load of EXP and will now have to deal with his own problems as opposed to his summoners
Faraway-R chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
To sum up. Over the course of two days and two epic encounters, our hero is left:

-With addled brains and really messed up wiring

-Unable to visit Magical Britain without permission from Albus 'Greater Good' Dumbledore

-Unable to interfere with Albus 'Righteous Zealot' Dumbledore's plans on Harry Potter in any way, shape, and form

-Epic-spell-magic-ability-barred (though it doesn't remove his extraordinary ones)

-Transformed into a seemingly ordinary cat (which takes care of most extraordinary abilities)

-And chucked to who-knows-where by a dimension-hopping Force Dragon (implying a really wide range of where he could end up)

Sucks to be John. Note to self - if I ever get to be a moderate-high level I will have a triple-anti-magic-field-protected neck pouch on the inside of which will be five tokens that have a cast/day on-user spells, activateable by pressing on them. They will be Mage's Disjunction, Heal, Greater Dispel, Break Enchantment, and Remove Curse.
Sorrowful Stone chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Still cool. Now he's a cat. An EPIC BOSS cat. Yeah...
Millennium Collector chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
I'm sorry to say this, but this entry is the biggest fail I have ever seen... and I mostly frequent the FORUMS...
Judah chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Enjoyed this series so far. Might want to note that #2, while not 'completed' as such, segues directly into this one.
Lord Sia chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
... I can see where this is going.


You've inspired me, or should I say tempted me, to write my own version. Mmm, Lunar Exalted powers... Well, Solars have some pretty Awesome stuff, but nothing beats the ability to transform into a flying, virtually invulnerable mountain of claws, eyes, tentacles and teeth.

We'll see if I can actually get something sufficiently coherent for me to post.
Sam chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
In the end, John got kicked like a pussy. And that's even true!

It's good, but alway in the end, John lose. Well, 2nd ad 3rd series of it, he did.

I'm glad you're not continuing this, I was hoping you stop after the 1st one but meh. It's hard to keep seeing this.
Rexnos chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
All your D&D stories make me wish I knew more about it. I've played a little with a few of my friends, but I know more about role playing than about rules and regulations. I guess that would make me a more fun player, but I know I'd really get a kick out of making a character I created very powerful. The fun factor would jump exponentially if I could drop said character in any old world of my choosing.

In any case, more fun stuff. It was a bit rough, but that's understandable considering you dredged it from the abyss. Not much in the way of character development or detailed battle sequences, but you certainly have the potential to go back and add them if you wish. I'd like to see how Rin or Shirou would interact with John given more time.

Then again, I'm also more interested in the hijinks Joshua and Louise are getting into, so I'd much rather you funnel your effort over there. I'll always welcome the jaunts of the dungeon crawler, but he'd need another full storyline if he wanted to catch my interest to the degree Louise and Joshua have.


Selias chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
He got all of his magic blocked and was turned into a cat? That's a pretty odd ending.
Teucrian chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Huh, well that was interesting, though the ending really fell flat.
ffn notices chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I don't know much about Fate/Stay Night, but I'm glad to see more of Dungeon Crawler!
Bailey Matutine chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I am confused. Familiar of Zero crossover?

Was that what was going to happen next; John becoming a familiar on the other end of that gate?
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