Reviews for Titania the Seductress
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
daniel 29 chapter 2 . 10/26/2012
To finally jave something to match naruto's indomitable will what a concept
daniel 29 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
a surprising picture of someone who may look seductive but acting seductive that's a wait and see approach
Zoji chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
I know you said this was a two-shot but could you have a sequel? This is great!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
Fantasitc work.

Really love the last paragraph.
VOGoshinki chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
I really enjoyed it.

I espaically love the ending where you describe the role play aspect. Really well done.
DragFire chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
Very good two-shot. I enjoyed it very much
Darkth Shadow chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
wow this is amazing
Takai153 chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This looks great. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Though I am disappointed to hear this is only a two-shot. Erza's requip magic makes for a ton of delicious cosplay possibilities. Hope there will be some cosplay in the lemon. I'd also like to see some anal sex, however with this being not just their first time together, but Erza's first time with anyone (and it sounds like Naruto's as well), it might be out of place. Another reason I'd like more. Oh well, can't get everything you want in life and I don't mean to sound unappreciative. I'm very glad that your doing this, which is why I want to see more. I'm greedy like that. XD
Savoxgut chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
wow, another amazing story, now with Erza, although the (?) baffles me a bit, but that does not diminish the good

I'll be waiting for the next chapter

bye
The Red Star chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Good start. A couple of errors, just one or two, and nothing really noticeable. I only noticed because I'm anal like that. You did a pretty good job of getting into Erza's mindset. I can see her acting like this in canon. Of the Naruto/Erza stories I've read, very few stay true to her character. Quite honestly, I imagine even the canon idiot Naruto would be attracted to the canon Erza. This pairing is one of the most believeably in Naruto/Fairy Tail crossovers.

I look forward to seeing part 2. Keep at it!

Forever in the Sky,

The Red Star
Swordude chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I like the idea, but you need to re-read a few of your paragraphs. I flat out had to read every other sentence in the fourth paragraph three times to understand what you meant. e.g. "..even then forgiven despite the fact of nearly being a sacrifice." could be better written as something along the lines of "Even then forgiving her, despite her nearly becoming a sacrifice." or something.

Other than that there's very little else that is off.

Keep it real,

-ude
LuckyShadowWolf chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Are you taking after NeonZangetsu's idea of pairing Naruto with every girl in the Fairy Tail Manga?
Cyspark01 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Poor Erza doesn't know what to do. Though considering Erza's nature how does she become a suductress. This sounds like she basically stumbling in the dark about their relationship. I guess that she going to be a dominating little minx once they become more physical in their relationship. Then naruto is like completely suprised by whats going on, but I'm sure he had thoughts about their relationship moving on the next level. Cant wait to see what happens next
onslaught172 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
epic