|Reviews for Hostile Takeover|
| Ciycat chapter 15 . 8/22/2012
One again I can't Waite for an update
Keep up the awesome work
I shall be waiting!
| Ciyvat chapter 12 . 6/23/2012
Wahh! you gave me a taste with this chapter!
I hunger for more! Update soon please!
| Hennigan chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Firstly, despite wanting to help a bro out, Kain wouldn't give a shit about Raziel. He'd get him out of the sword and that would be that. No strings attached. He threw him into an abyss of eternal pain and torment to further his own agenda after all.
Also, the dialogue is awkward as hell. It's lumpy and drags on too long. Not only that, but it tells the audience the story instead of showing it. Save the details of Raziel for later chapters instead of throwing it all in now. You've made crucial plot points as boring as fuck by telling me in rushed dialogue rather than describing this. Because of this, the story comes off as poorly written.
There's still hope. Try again.
| soulhunting shewolf chapter 6 . 2/27/2012
yay raz gets to keep his wings!
| soulhunting shewolf chapter 5 . 2/23/2012
i think you should let raziel keep his wings
| Akumu Kagami chapter 5 . 2/22/2012
I think Raziel should keep his wings, but be able to hide them when he needs to. That's just my opinion. Another great chapter by the way. Looking forward to the next one!
| Akumu Kagami chapter 4 . 2/18/2012
Another awesome chapter! Thank you!
| Akumu Kagami chapter 3 . 2/17/2012
Thank You for another great chapter! I've been waiting in eager anticipation for you to update! Keep up the great work!