|Reviews for Failure|
| Steven Carnell chapter 1 . 1/15
You have a most unique approach to prose and poetry. It is refreshing to find such. It is an ellipsical approach - a stream of consciousness with enough information in order to make extrapolations and deductions. The parts left out of a normal narrative can be deduced. Imagination can supply the rest.
| Reviewer Of The Forgotten chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
It was a good poem and it was enjoyable but there were a few mistakes. Mainly missing words and puncuation. Don't forget to proofread. Good job.