|Reviews for More Than Manners Will|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22
| Salovi chapter 1 . 4/20
Heartbreaking. I loved James here, and Sirius is so so brave.
| purpleradiance chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
oh, sirius, you brave fool.I love how you switched the POV. I love the way you described sirius's home life. I can absolutely imagine any canon acting like this! I must admit I have a particular fondness for these Black family chapters; especially the way you write. with just a few scenes, you paint such a backstory. Thank you so much for every one of these wonderful chapters. This story is an absolute gem and i love how dedicated you are to story. Hope you get better soon, whether or not you grant us more chapters of this masterpiece!
| QueenLight20007 chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
I love how loyal you have Sirius to Remus. A lot of people tend to just show Sirius' loyalty to James when in actual fact he would have been loyal to all three of the other mauradars. I was wondering if you were going to continue with canon, in that Sirius would run away to James' house? I think it would be quite interesting if he were to go to Remus', especially with how close you have written Sirius and Remus and I don't think James would quite understand Sirius' desire to run away. Anyways, I'm looking forward to an update for Against the Moon and in the main time, I am enjoying these little extras :)
| uptillthree chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
Oh, this was absolutely wonderful writing! I feel just horrible for Sirius - a masterful missing moment.
| AlmightySponge chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Whoa! I totally just noticed that these side-fics exist! It's written from Sirius' viewpoint too!
;-; Poor Sirius... uhuhuhuhuuuu...
| TheEighthBit chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Wow. Poor Sirius. I love the way you wrote this story, and I love how it fits with the plot of the main fic. This was brilliant :)
| DerangedxandxSarcastic chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Ah, damn. I'd almost forgotten the Blacks' terrible treatment of poor Remus in all the ensuing drama of the next year. Fantastic story and I love how you ended it. Even if it makes me rather sad...
| deaduser1294 chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Oh god, Siriusss...
I just want to hug him and - and-
bleh, my emotions right now. :( I hate you, Walburga, I hate you, I hate you.
You are an amazing writer, by the by.
| hydraspit chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
This was a great missing moment! I don't know how I missed reading these when they were first published! As with your other one, I really enjoyed reading everything from Sirius's perspective. And the insight into the horrors that Sirius faces at home. Poor boy. At least he managed to help Remus.
| SimplyEcho chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Poor Sirius:/ this was amazing like everything else you write.
| Jessica682 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Oh Siri... *broken heart* my poor boy D;
| rosebud1424 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Wow I Love IT
| mokubahv chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
"Instinctive snarl." I love the wording there. Though I dunno if it was intentional, I love your hinting at his animagus form.
I love how much you have Sirius care about Remus. It's just so touching and sweet but also heart-wrenchingly sad.
'His twelve years' experience had taught him that adults were generally easy to manipulate, and when that failed they could be made to listen with reason.' lol.
'...be allowed back inside to use the fireplace.' That sentence is just incredibly funny and bizarre out of context.
'...a pained look in his eyes that told James he was thinking of Remus.' Awww- James noticing that and making the connection shows that it must happen often. If only Remus knew just how deeply Sirius cares...
"Obviously, I'm not wanted here." Really? When did'ja figure that one out? lol.
:( Poor Sirius! But at least James got to kick that creature for us. Mind, that only escalated his punishment but still! Pre-revenge!
I really loved this 'missing moment.' It was definitely enjoyable and I'm glad you did this one. .~ I didn't like having to vote for the next one though...I wanted to choose most of them. It's not fair you making us pick. xP
I know you are generally the epitomy of perfect writing, but I just thought I would let you know that you used the wrong word in your first sentence. "Past" is used when referring to time - the correct word would be "passed" which means to move by something. .~
| canadiangirl13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I really enjoyed this story! You should write lots more of these! I can't wait to read more of your Harry Potter writing! Keep up the great work!