|Reviews for Visiting the Garden|
| Gngr chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Wow, that was tasteful and erotic. Honestly, after the warning I wasn't sure if I could read. Then it clicked that despite the subject matter I have enjoyed all your stories I have previously read and moved forward. AND I wasn't disappointed.
You captured the combination of passionate love, lustful desire, with whatever the magic is between all the bonds extremely well. Kudos for a great job!
| Brytte Mystere chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Ohh, This is soo Cool! PLEASE, continue... or make a sequel... PLEASEEEEE
| msbuffi chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
OMG, Wylis! WOW! Pure smut written is such a tasteful (pun intended) manner! I am definitely keeping this one in my file to read again & again! Fabulous! This made my Saturday night, and Angel reaped the benefits so he sends his most gracious thanks to you as well. Any plans on continuing this hot, hot, hot one-shot? I could just imagine the possibilities! Pure erotica, and delightfully written! More, more, more!
All the Best to You, and Wishes for Happy Thanksgiving to you & and your family!
msbuffy, the Perv!
| GalitAvigail chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Ho wow I am speechless and boy that means a lot, believe me I never shut the hell up... LOL that was just wow is it too embarrassing to admit that I need a cold shower? Well I don't care I am all hot and bothered... Wonderful lemony story that was just magnificent... And if you are looking for a new career I think producing a porn film might just be your thing... LOL again thank you for sharing it is always a pleasure reading your stories... Love from Israel, Galit
| PinballWizardess chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Awesome story! Thank you for sharing!
| Pam in pastels chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
That was sexy and fantastic! Great job. I hope you might write a sequel with our favorite snarky vamp, Pam. Love, PIP.
| vilannh chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Ok that was a lemon grove not just the cart. HOT! HOT! HOT! there is nothing else to say
| Pook368 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Thank you, thank you for that very special treat!
| Baronessjai chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
naughty naughty...but I'm lovin it :)
| lovinthevamp chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
That was beautiful and hot! I certainly have had that fantasy before. For some reason I love Eric, Godric and Sookie together - it is always such a beautiful pairing! Thanks for the fantasy!
| alyanne1375 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Holy Crap, Batman...That was so hot there is smoke coming from my ears because it fried my brain and steam coming from betwwen my legs because... well i think you can guess why. WOW! When you write smut you dont joke around! OK... Its time for a long cold shower...maybe some ice cubes for my ... drink. hehehehehehe
| Spygrrl chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Love it! Very sexy and beautiful. You paired the three of them so well. Yay for inspiration. :)
| Nalnacs Schmedley chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
The greatest smut I have read in weeks. Bravo and thank u.
| ap630 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
It's a pity that your chocolate cookie addiction only comes once a month. That was brilliant, as usual. It may have been all smut and sex but somehow the underlying love of Sookie and Eric, plus Eric and Godric shone right through.
| Debbie37 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Wow. That was super hot! Even though it was mostly sex, you still showed the relationships between everyone.