Reviews for Konoha's Newest Legend: The Maelstrom
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 11/19
that was good keep the chapters coming
Death 59 chapter 5 . 10/7
Type your review ass and let him dominate those bitches
kingrobert84 chapter 5 . 10/5
doin awesome man whens update?
Korog the Oversoul chapter 2 . 9/3
When will Naruto figure out his mind his rules?
Korog the Oversoul chapter 1 . 9/3
Regarding the rinnegan's abilities you're right and wrong, if an eternal M. Sharingan evolves it still keeps all the powers, anyway flowed smoothly but a little short. That said I LOVE IT!
biob1 chapter 2 . 8/19
At least attempt to explain how having the RINNEGAN which mostly revolves around jutsu makes him better at TAIJUTSU.
biob1 chapter 1 . 8/19
Pretty good
lou2003us chapter 5 . 8/9
Looking scared of reading next chapter.
thor94 chapter 5 . 8/6
i want see more submissive naruto in BDSM with women using toys (cockring, cage, sound, gag, plug, etc) and naruto finally being raped (not almost, but his ass filled and fucked hard)
thor94 chapter 4 . 8/6
really confusing chapter.
no narusaku please.
thor94 chapter 3 . 8/6
i'am agree with naruto.
i don't want him with bearb.
and i want naruto toyed, in bdsm, and fucked with SM girls using toys on him without interruption
thor94 chapter 2 . 8/6
good chapter.
i hope, next time we will obtain the lemon with naruto fucked by kyuubi.
maxridelover chapter 5 . 8/5
hmm this will be spicy!
Wesdog101 chapter 1 . 8/5
Why bother calling her the Kyuubi? She does not have her personality nor her looks, so why call her what she obviously is not? You could have easily just introduced a powerful OC and it would be practically the same. Why is my favorite character in Naruto butchered in almost every story involving him/her?
bicklepie chapter 5 . 8/5
Poor Naruto. Hope he makes it out alive.
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