Reviews for Shades of Gray
Anono chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Haha composing an extra long song- fab :)
inkdfantasy chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
The ending was very clever. It doesn't outright state what happened, but one can guess if they've been paying attention. Lovely.
AyndeRod chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Talk about an excellent set up for a murder investigation! hahaha
Seyfert chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Very good story!

I just knew Jareth had done something to that song.

I partly wish that you had written more chapters, elaborating what Sarah saw in the Underground, what it took to convince her, but on the other han that ending is *so* good! And I suspect that the moment she agreed to go with him her decision was already made.

Thanks for sharing this! :)
UndergroundDaydreams chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
Such a lovely story and the scene was beautifully written. You have a way with capturing the moment and pulling us in. And the touches of humor with the romance was delightful. Really enjoyed it!
The.Lost.Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
I feel badly for Jeff, but you know, I don't really feel badly for him. XD

I knew Jareth was going to pull something with the song being longer than normal. He's tricky like that.
Eienvine chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Ooh, I loved this! One of the more realistic (if any story about a goblin king can be considered realistic) treatments of how the two of them might end up together that I've ever read. And the ending was perfection.
Lovejareth chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
I like it very much. I feel a bit sad for the poor other guy but I always want Sarah to end up with Jareth. However I did think that the ending was a bit loose so I would very much appreciate it if you could make this a two shot and write a proper ending to this. Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaase. Have mercy-says the drama queen in me. Lol. Anyway I liked it
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
*sigh*

A tale very well told. I loved the character interplay and the dialogue and the imagery of light and shadow and discussions of grey and unmaking. I loved the melodies and the melancholia and the talk of childhood and choices and power.

I loved your tale.

Thank you for sharing such a special little offering :-)
Adieu FanFic xxx chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
*sigh*

A tale very well told. I loved the character interplay and the dialogue and the imagery of light and shadow and discussions of grey and unmaking. I loved the melodies and the melancholia and the talk of childhood and choices and power.

I loved your tale.

Thank you for sharing such a special little offering :-)
PurpleIvy chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
This is a very good beginning. I look forward to seeing how it turns out.
wizzcat chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I love this story. It was one of my favourites from the Fic Exchange.

Such a beautiful description of the beach, and such a lovely calm pace to the whole piece. You wrote the characters perfectly, I'm guessing she chose not to come back, and not that Jareth tricked her. Either way, I'm sure she's happy. ;)

You always write such beautiful stories. Thank you.
FelineGrace chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I loved it! Very nicely written and so much more logical and realistic then many fanfictions. I liked how her main objection was that she didn't KNOW him, which is SO important. You've got a good head on your shoulders :)
tomoe-gozen52 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
This is lovely. Such nice descriptions and I like this version of Jareth. Sarah - I hope she won't be too stubborn. Jeff or Jareth - is there really a choice to be made?
Taneva Rose chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Looks promising. Some great swoon lines. Looking forward to more.
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