Reviews for A Beautiful Mess
Judyblue95 chapter 20 . 11/26/2014
what a great song! what a lovely story! one more chapter to go, huh? I've loved every word!
Judyblue95 chapter 19 . 11/25/2014
YES! finally...
Judyblue95 chapter 16 . 11/25/2014
foolish Bella. that horrible Garrett is stalking her and she needs to tell Edward. you say you have a plan. I'll trust that...
Judyblue95 chapter 13 . 11/25/2014
Edward is so adorable that I just want to eat him right up!
Judyblue95 chapter 9 . 11/24/2014
this was sweet. HE is sweet. Garrett is a real dick for messing her up this way...but she played a part in believing it. Why can she believe the negative things but not the positive ones? Maybe time will let her...and Edward's persistence.
Judyblue95 chapter 8 . 11/24/2014
sounds like a line from a song... I'm having a great time reading this lovely first of yours...
Judyblue95 chapter 6 . 11/24/2014
what songs are these she's singing? i'm still reading and wondering when she will let up on herself. i know. she's trying. i see that.
Judyblue95 chapter 4 . 11/24/2014
she is a mess, isn't she? poor baby...
Judyblue95 chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
your first, huh? now I KNOW I have to read it...
commerou chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
I just found this story and I think I'm gonna enjoy reading it - it sounds promising.

BookwormBaby2580 chapter 21 . 9/1/2014
Aww. what a perfect capstone to the story!

I'm a little shocked that I've finished one of your fics and I'm not hemorrhaging all over the floor right now. Seriously, I don't even know what to do with all the blood that's not staining my carpet. I guess I'll have to go read another one.
BookwormBaby2580 chapter 20 . 9/1/2014
Aww, they're all sweet and stuff!
BookwormBaby2580 chapter 19 . 9/1/2014
I had to laugh at my timing for this chapter. I had music from Tchaikovsky's Romeo and Juliet playing. The Vendetta Theme was playing through the scene with Garrett and the hospital, but it transitioned into the Love Theme in time for the cuddly parts with Bella and Edward. Nifty coincidence!
BookwormBaby2580 chapter 17 . 8/31/2014
Ooh, one kiss. That's harsh.
BookwormBaby2580 chapter 16 . 8/31/2014
Um. I'm very worried right now.
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