Reviews for A Beautiful Mess
TwistStix chapter 12 . 12/18/2011
Yay, she called him! Finally some progress for these two. Loved the crazy hair cutting scene and at least she used a pair if scissors and not a razor lol
linz1628 chapter 12 . 12/18/2011
I think he did the right thing giving her time, I think it helped her see that she wants him to stick around. She's in therapy and taking classes, a friendship seems to be the way to go for now. I love how this story is progressing, you can feel her heartbreak.
Jenn1214 chapter 12 . 12/18/2011
She is finally going to try. Can't wait for the next chapter
twilly chapter 12 . 12/18/2011
She taking a chance, and giving him one. Yay! Also, I love Heidi for this; "His heart's too good to be broken."
deranged-dreamer chapter 12 . 12/18/2011

She did a britney spears!

Finally they are going to start moving forward, right?

DawnsWhimsy chapter 12 . 12/18/2011
xtothey chapter 12 . 12/18/2011
Awww, I love the ending. I love how excited he is. I hope it makes her feel good to feel wanted by someone.
TwistedLea chapter 11 . 12/13/2011
Ah bugger bollocks fuck shit.
TwistedLea chapter 10 . 12/13/2011
Ahhhhhhh what's happening...
TwistedLea chapter 9 . 12/13/2011
Totes ugly girl cries over here. Thanks.

A few booboos here too. :/
TwistedLea chapter 8 . 12/13/2011
Psst a few booboos in this chapter.
TwistedLea chapter 6 . 12/13/2011
So it's going good... how many chaps before she crash and burns?
TwistedLea chapter 4 . 12/13/2011
This Bella is hitting a bit close to home.
TwistedLea chapter 3 . 12/13/2011
"I'm pretty strong you know, I think I can carry your baggage, if you'll just let me. I may even be able to lighten your load," he said, standing with me. He reached up and cradled my jaw in his hand.

*dreamy sigh* baggage.
TwistedLea chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Damn. It just sucked me the fuck in.
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