Reviews for Mor'amr Onr Nuanen Hjarta
OechsnerC chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Love it please update soon
Leesi chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
This is truly amazing. I love it! c:
maire 53 chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
This is good can't wait for the next chapter
j1ack chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
This is really good. It's short, but it efficiently gets the point across. I also like how you used your language in a similar style that Paolini did. (ex. "I wish to convey a matter of some importance)This language is not like what we use today, but it stays more closely to the original Inheretince Cycle, and it makes the writing seem more like another world. Very good job!
Peter chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Good job! But I didn't really like it. The characters don't really sound like they should. Arya wouldn't have accepted just like that
THeReeDeR9295 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Is there a next chapter? If so can you post it as fast as you can?
T D'Amaze chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I know that most elves don't marry, but seeing as Arya has spent so much time around humans and Eragon is indeed human I guess I could see it happening. More emphasis could be put on this fact however.

Anyways this is great. Its exactly what Inheritance was missing, and it would have improved the horrible ending drastically. Will you be continuing this? If you choose to I'll definitely read it D
shurtugal88 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I like the idea for your story. But with arya being a elf and as rider eragon must be held to their ways but doesn't believe them. They wouldn't be getting married maybe a type of engagement but they would just become mates. This is your story not mine and borrowed from CP. Keep it up and I hope it gets better
IronMikeTyson chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Elves do not marry. Still great story.