Reviews for The Untitled
therisingharvestmoon chapter 4 . 4/23/2013
OH WOW. OHHHHHHH. OHHHHHH.
You sneaky...
Yup. That was brilliant.
A.
therisingharvestmoon chapter 3 . 4/23/2013
YES. I was looking for a fic that had all this in it! Two female characters, previous lesbian squeeze revealed, and yes! I love that it's not even a THING that it's two women but that it's just like any other relationship. Like, the problem wasn't because they're women. I love this.
therisingharvestmoon chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
I love this!
NextChristineDaae chapter 4 . 12/28/2011
*NCD, unable to write but just about able to read, FINALLY gets to LV's stories ...* You'll have to forgive me if I'm incoherent as I'm not good (what's new, lol), but I did want to get these into my brain before things become more chaotic around me (will text back in a bit, and Little Women was fab! :D). Right. I've read all three and now will review them in order. I have to be honest: I was wondering if it was in fact Hecketty from how snappy the recipient of the counselling was with Zelda (fab name); even HB isn't normally THAT rude, lol. But what I wanted to commend you on was the idea of doing it like that; it was very clever and when I saw the bit about the piano I smiled so much because of something I've written umpteen months ago, lol. I really do wonder if I'm psychic sometimes. What I loved most about it, other than the very nice writing, was the revelations coming to light ... which leads me to my next review ... NCD XxX
Princess Sammi chapter 4 . 12/23/2011
OMG I can’t believe it was Broomhead!

Apologies for the delay dear, but I’m beginning to play catch up.

Most most clever my dear, not to mention a little deceptive ;)

The idea of a counsellor was just so inspired! And original! I adored how you set it up to make it seem like it was Constance who was seeing the counsellor when the whole time it was actually Broomhead.

I’m guessing that the ‘her’ mentioned, would be Constance. BH was in love with HB now that is a little creepy... You’ve made me feel a little bit sorry for Broomhead now after reading the backstory you’ve created for her. Btw I love how you called chapter 4: Not what you expected, as it indeed, was not what most of the readers would’ve been expecting. :D

I’m so glad you decided to start writing, after what you’d said to me about not really having the time, ideas etc, can’t wait to read some more from you

Brava

Princess S

XxX
Aleksandra Hardbroom chapter 4 . 11/29/2011
That was a shocking start to the chapter. And her mother hurting her like that is abuse at least.

I though it was CONSTANCE!
Aleksandra Hardbroom chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
Well I liked this one ALOT! And how Constance finley opened up a little about her childhood and like of playing the piano. Then studying alot in school. the most intersing thing is her parents at least . I'm going to read and review this.
Aleksandra Hardbroom chapter 2 . 11/29/2011
well that was an intersting chapter. I just feel sorry for constance.
HB's Favourite chapter 4 . 11/28/2011
Awesome work, well done. I had assumed it was Constance and thought you were implying she had been in love with Broomhead! This is much more plausible.

Cleverly executed - it makes a change for a twist to be so unpredictable.
SweetlyMagnifique chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
*Faints*

OMG! It was Broomhead? I never would have guessed that... whoa, I haven't been fooled like that for ages. LOve it, can't wait for your next story :)
typicalRAinbow chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
Haha! Yes! Just read it today love the twist! Think you deserve an award for that :D I did wonder why you kept referring to her as "the older witch" etc, but didn't think for a moment it was Broomhead, although when she said about changing her name and cutting family ties gave us a wee clue toward the end. (Answer me this though: The mysterious 'Her' Is THAT Constance?)

The truth potion was also an inspired idea. I'll have to re-read it when I get a chance, so as to see it with BH rather then HB. Again well done, and congrats on a fab first fic, I look forward to reading more from you. :D
HB rules chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
:O There are no words except for I did NOT see that coming! Admittedly I did think not using names might mean something in the first chapter but I have to admit you had me!

Wow that was a pretty amazing chapter and a really good end. Still reeling from shock!

Will definitely re-read this fic as that puts a whole new perspective on things. Very clever little story!

Well done for the best sneaky deception I have ever read!

HB rules

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Chrissiemusa chapter 4 . 11/23/2011
Okay you got me there but when I first read it back in chapter 1 I wondered if it was actually Constance but I just decided to stick with her but Broomhead, I didn't see that coming, hence the title right? The Untitled, meaning, the main character with no name that sounds like Constance but isn't really Constance at all. I thought the sentiments about the piano, about breaking her fingers, her uncles abuse etc. was quite sad and it takes alot for something to make me feel at least a little sorry for someone as nasty as Broomhead. Great little first fic :) well done.
Chrissiemusa chapter 3 . 11/22/2011
Nice chapter and I feel sorry for Constance not playing the piano :( but I suppose she was just trying to make her mother feel better. I look forward to the next chapter and the story of Constance's love interest from the past is intriguing :)
SweetlyMagnifique chapter 3 . 11/22/2011
Well done again. It's great to read something about Constance's past, can't wait for the net chapter.
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