|Reviews for Ever Ever After|
| loststorieshogwartz chapter 1 . 1/14
I really like the idea. One thing, when someone speaks, enter; example: He was confused. He had no idea what to do.
"Why don't we go down this hall?" she asked.
If right now, your thinking that's horrid, I agree I was winging it. No, seriously, I really like this idea and can't wait to see how it pans out.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/14/2013
Sara and stubby all the way
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/16/2013
I HATE IT !
| Jasminepotterdemi-god22 chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
I like stubby and sarah together. Love your story!
| RedStalkingDeath chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
I like the story this far! ;) Please, tell me you haven't abandoned it...?
| FrostRose chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
great job so far, i think stubby/sarah pairing would be cute. i think its been a few fridays since you've updated though. i would love to give ideas for your story, but i'm not that great at spelling, so i don't think i could be a beta. sorry! can't wait for the next chapter, hope you get it up soon!
| Dimitri Darkson Makros chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Like your story. keep writting.
| snowwygirl4 chapter 2 . 8/8/2012
Aw. I really like it! I think that you should update this really soon because I am excited to know! :)
| z dream chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
This is so so cute! can't believe its been two years since it aired, already. Saw it last night, and your right-the endings not very satisfying
| CatieTheAwesome chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
Aw, this story is adorable! And you're right, we were robbed of a fairytale ending. Can't wait for chapter two!
| Eclipticvibe chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
So I just recently stumbled across this movie as I didn't even know it existed and I felt that it had a lot of potential unfortunately that potential was wasted when Disney decided not to do a sequel. Seriously they make sequels to everything but that's not the point. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the first chapter of this and I am eager to see where it will go. The way that you portray Jessica is very believable and fits into her character. I think that it would be cool for you to keep some of Chris's real world awkwardness for a while at least. A Sarah/Stubby relationship is only realistic there were so many undertones to it. I am eagerly awaiting the updates for this story.
| onedirection33 chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
| GGirl16Hunter-DaughterOfApollo chapter 2 . 5/4/2012
Oh my gosh, I love your story! I've just read the first chapter and I think your an amazing author:) don't worry about thinking your too old to enjoy the movie, I have a cousin who's 25 and still loves movies like Starstruck. I love the Sara/Stubby pairing and if you still need a beta, PM me and I would love to help:) I'm not sure if I'll be much help with being the inspiration part but I'll still try my best if you ask me to beta. Hope you update soon:)
| Gegeatt chapter 2 . 4/24/2012
I already love the first chapter! I'm not a big Disney Channel fun but this movie was so adorable and I think it needed a better ending, it was ended too ubruptly. Please continue writing, I love your style and the characters and being portrayed in the exact way. By the way it doesn't matter if you are 21 you're never too late to achieve your dreams.
You asked for ideas but I honestly don't know what you could do next, obviously continue the meeting withi his parents... Ok ok ok an idea just hit, add drama something like either Chris' fabs don't except Jess so they start sending her hate mail and stuff but Chris/ Jess remain a couple.
I do like Stubby/ Sara relationship, it's sad it didn't develop in the movie but that's why fanfiction exists!
Could you please read my story? I'm currently losing faith in my story, which I wish I don't, I'm not getting mamy reviews and I don't know what people think. I would really aprreciate if you read it. Thanks so much.
Update ASAP! Loving your idea :)
| Invisibl-Covr-Grl chapter 2 . 4/15/2012
Keep going! And the Stara (just came up with that ; ) couple would be awesome! Can't wait for more!
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