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| ChibiLady chapter 1 . 9/20/2017
| NessaTheSinner chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
Well this is a interesting spin on things. I really like it though I think it kind of suits him. So sorry for Lelouch though! Hmm maybe you could do another one shot as a prequel of sorts like how he built up this world around himself and Lelouch's and his relationship before this happened maybe there was some accident a knock to the head and it messed with his memories and that's what's happened here.
| Sapadu chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Jesus. The really, REALLY bizarre thing about this fic is… how close it strikes to home for a totally different reason. I hadn't thought of it before, but after a stint in a psych ward, myself (don't ask) this actually comes across as kind of thought provoking - how often DO we let our own fantasies and delusions consume us? Do we fantasize to help ourselves cope, when it's really causing us more harm? And, on a meta level, how many people go into some kind of fiction and just never come out? Like… I dunno, writing so much fanfiction for that subject that they never leave and have a real life (Not a dig at you, but myself… possibly) Or what if that was the case for the writer of the Code Geass story - they got so into their world and their characters and never wanted to leave? And where is that line where we sometimes don't want to leave whatever it is we're watching or reading?
So… with this in mind, this fic, for all of the creepy feelings it struck in me, actually helped me appreciate the show… for it's flaws. Because without those flaws, who knows if we might have gotten stuck in the world of Geass and never wanted to leave?
| I-Love-Trunks1 chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Aw, poor Suzaku and Lelouch. That was sad. Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much!
| Worldpuppyday chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
don't really understand this story...the plot is a bit too messy...
| ayaheartright chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
very creative. This would make a good serious... but works perfectly fine as a standalone also. Poor Suzaku. Poor Lelouch :(((
| Destiny.Hope45 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
This is good.
| CrimsomRed-24 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Poor Suzaku and Lelouch :(
But this story is well done ~ I wonder what happened with Suzaku , that he is like that now . You are really good in this ciao ~
| Halloween567 chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
This was amazing. Holy shit. Wonderful writing and a very impacting sense the whole time I was reading it.
| NinjahNeachy chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
At first I was like "Wha?" Then I finally caught on that Suzaku is a little loopy. I'm still a little confused on what's-what's but I'll get there :)
Update soon becuz I'm think this is great. Plus I like crazy Suzaku. Hes entertaining :D
| Rei Blackstone chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Wow, just wow... um... wow... shocked with nothing more to say than wow...
Good, but wow... I never conceived the idea of Suzaku gone psycho in a mental hospital...
| MillyAshfordFan chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I love this fic. You did such a wonderful job with this. The parts with the italics were great. They added an ominous feel and a sort of "hive mind" feel with the hospital staff. You did a wonderful job integrating Suzaku's craziness with the real world. At the beginning it was pretty funny, but I kind of wanted to cry at the end. :(
There is one thing I'm curious about: how did Lelouch and Suzaku end up as lovers? Were they childhood friends and then Suzaku just began to withdraw from the real world? Did something traumatic happen to him? I know you were filling the prompt, but I'm curious about your interpretation.
| rosez-have-thornz chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
That was a really interesting read! Will this be continued?
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I think you just wrote the fic i have always wanted to write. :D
I love the idea of Suzaku going off is rocker. Everyone tries to nitpick at Lelouch it seems, but an insane Suzaku is just so intriguing. It's that innocence with him that kind of makes draws at the ideas there is so much going on under the surface. Then there is all the shit that's happened to him. I mane com on-he killed his father. There has got to be some damn awful repercussions.
I think i like most about this is that none of those things happened though. He made them all up. It really makes me wonder what even could have triggered such a reaction.
It was really good. It clearly provoked a lot of thought haha.
| Anime Yaoi Lover chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
...why does this say Complete at the top? This can't be complete. It's not allowed to be. I...the only way I can see it being complete is if Suzaku dies during the electrotherapy, or if it works and cures him, but from the tone, I don't think it would cure him...
That said, this was an amazing story. I love how Suzaku's psychosis adjusts itself to fit whatever circumstances arise, and how we flip through the canon scenes so that you can see what Suzaku's seeing but then with the overlay of "all of that never happened.". Beautifully written.
Thanks for sharing-and I really hope this isn't actually complete!