Reviews for Commercial Catastrophe
TwiDash FTW .Harmony Dash chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
MaxBookWorm chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
Hahahahahaha! This is really good! Keep writing these types of stories and I'll keep reading! ;)
GraphicsGirl chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Haha, this is so awesome. I think you got their characters spot on. And P'Onyeal, love it!
Eph 5.8 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
"20% cooler in ten seconds flat", just the thing Rainbow would say. I think you got the characters spot-on, especially when RD was talking about energy drinks. I don't think I could see Rarity saying "idiot" on account of MLP:FiM being a kids' show, but aside from that, she just got replaced by a reckless tomboy. She has every right to be angry.

I enjoyed the story.