|Reviews for Commercial Catastrophe|
| GraphicsGirl chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Haha, this is so awesome. I think you got their characters spot on. And P'Onyeal, love it!
| Eph 5.8 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
"20% cooler in ten seconds flat", just the thing Rainbow would say. I think you got the characters spot-on, especially when RD was talking about energy drinks. I don't think I could see Rarity saying "idiot" on account of MLP:FiM being a kids' show, but aside from that, she just got replaced by a reckless tomboy. She has every right to be angry.
I enjoyed the story.