Reviews for Intimately And Intricately
10Blue10 chapter 1 . 5/21
I really like this story, and I don't think the tenses were really that confusing. Vworp on!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
God that was tedious and hard to follow. I get why you wrote it that way, but that kind of wording really only works when spoken.
fishxcustard chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
This was VERY interesting! Took me a while to figure it out though! Love it;)
TisZiny chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
the 'three tenses' style gives me a serious headache, it's so hard and jolt-y to read, do you think you could post another version in just one tense? I really like the idea of Idris/River/doctor but i just can't read this in the three tenses.