|Reviews for A Visit to a Friend Becomes Something More|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17
loved the story , love to see more ash/lancr storys️️
| zerorita chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Okay, so this kind of hot and really cute? I love how Lance is kind of dorky and Ash is somewhat oblivious. It was a short and pleasant read, and while it would be interesting to see it be more fleshed out and with a bigger plot, it works well as it is. Good work!
| elvesknightren chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
Dahlia would totally do that
fun to read Ash and Lance :)
| Rosie Vulpes chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
I like it but...where did pikachu go?
| Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
Very cute Love this :)
| Furandoru Sukaretto chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
*dies from cuteness*
| DragonFire Princess chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I Love the way this story is writing, Hope you'll uploads the story soon; I want to know what happen next in the story. So please update the story ASAP.
When will you continue this story?
I want to know what will happen next in the story.
| Miko Vampire chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Send out the wedding invitations!
| TheFrogFromHell chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
It wasn't all bad... I mean, I read the whole thing from beginning to end. Please check the grammar and spelling is all I can say.
| black angel in love chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
awe this is great
| Kam14 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Awesome job with this one-shot I loved it especially the ending keep up the awesome work.
| megamanxzeroaxel chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Hey great job not a bad pars at all!