|Reviews for The Path of Water|
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 24 . 11/27
Ok, this chapter pissed me the fuck off. I do not think you handled Chihero's reacion to grannies news well. Sh forgave her quickly and that is a huge fucking dishonor to those of use who have actually had those experiences.
Seriously, I don't know your life story but guessing from the HORRIBLE way you handled this whole scene I'm guessing you've never had a guy chase, never had someone you barely knew shove you down against a floor and tear at your pants but leave your shirt intact because it isn't ABOUT sex, it's about power. I bet you've never had someone grab at you without your consent, never felt vile and dirty and ASHAMED like you deserved it somehow, like when you're 13 and you have a secret you can't share and you just CRY when you get home, shower and shower and shower AND still not wash it away. And the murder, the fucking murder the hatred and anger and it's almost worse than everything else to know that if you had the opportunity you would take the mans life, violently and painfully and LAUGH while he begged you to stop because he didn't stop for you. Humans aren't meant to hold that kind of hate and it's bad enough when it's someone you barely know, a neighbor or the sophomore with the pretty eyes commits it or even has A HAND in it, knows and walks away, keeps quiet or even speaks in defense of the perpetrator makes it almost WORSE.
I said I don't know your story and my story isn't everyone's and I'd never presume to blame someone for what I read (I knew what I was getting into) but seeing this scene handled so NONCHALANTLY when it might be one of the worst events in a persons life is infuriating.
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 23 . 11/27
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 18 . 11/27
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 17 . 11/27
Chase is pregnant, isn't she?
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 16 . 11/27
I'm grinning like an idiot right now omg
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 15 . 11/27
Awwww. Great chapter!
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 9 . 11/26
I keep forgetting that Chase is a girl, all I can picture is the cook from harvest moon.
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 8 . 11/26
Aw, so cute! And man it must've sucked to have to wait for you to update this.
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 4 . 11/26
Woah... Uh, what's wrong with Haku?
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 3 . 11/26
I must admit that I'm a little confused for what's going on in this story, it has an almost disjointed-dream quality. That said, I think your writing style is absolutely gorgeous.
Though I find it hard to imagine Haku ever being a non-nice person/spirit.
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 1 . 11/26
But what's wrong with Haku?
| Shinra Dawn chapter 52 . 11/18
To the people who read the reviews before the story... This is an amazing tale, totally worth the read. Has an amazing plot, a wonderful cast of characters, and everyone goes through character development throughout the story. I rate this story easily 5 stars.
To the Author
I adore your way of writing. I always enjoy reading long fanfictions and your story kept me hooked until the very end. I look forward to reading volume 2. Please continue to entertain the world with your wonderful stories...
| obsessive-anime-freek-1 chapter 26 . 11/10
You... Made... Me... CRY MY FREAKING FACE OFF! I CAN'T STOP! THAT WAS SO SCARY AND I WAS ALMOST DEAD TOO! DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT. I ALMOST DIED! IT WAS AMAZING VERY CONVINCING! I loved it and was deathly scared for haku.
| terra chapter 21 . 11/9
Sorry I have an account but I am on my phone so I am not signed in. I really am living your story. It is amazing the details you write and you're writing style is nothing like I've ever read. It is beautiful. I love how you make Haku seen like a big tough guy in front of others and a total baby with Chihiro! I am gonna read your story till the end. My user name is obsessive-geek would you message me what chapter has sex in it so I can be aware of it. I need to be careful with that. Thanks and do keep writing you have an amazing writing style!
| Lady of the Fates chapter 36 . 11/7
My fav chap so far.