Reviews for Daybreak
ToxicSweetHart chapter 4 . 11/23/2011
lol cliff hanger but i do have a tip...slow down i feel like i have just read what could have been 10 chapters in four and that Tessa is being a lil too pushy idk iknow shes supposed to be but i wouldve slapped her by now lol but ya not to be rude too be helpful lol space events out and i think the story will do better
KaseyRae chapter 4 . 11/23/2011
Please Review!
Team Edward Rules All chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Awesome start! You picked the BEST NAME EVER for your narrator (My name) Update :)
HeLlHoUnD555 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
I think its a good plot d definitely like to read more
ToxicSweetHart chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
omg! write more please :D i realy like where this is going and stuff hehe edward was all like imma be reading you mind shes like why he laughing? sorry still on a twi-high from breaking dawn lol and it helps that im a big spaz ahhh rambelign anyway write!