Reviews for Distractions
FalconRukichi chapter 1 . 3/13/2015
MadameMorganLeFay chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
This is sweet! You could have used better words than "pretty... nice and amazing" though. I feel you could have gone further here. Also, the dialogue at the end is weak. First of all, Arthur comes off as rude when he says "You've been distracting me. I need it to stop.". If he really loved her, I doubt that he would have blamed her for feelings that she unwittingly induced. Secondly, if she thinks that he is going to break up with her, wouldn't she be a little more upset, rather than just "crestfallen"? Otherwise the ending is quite lovely. A nice drabble, even if it could be better in areas.
larasmith chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Breathtakingly unforgettably touching proposal! Who will plan the wedding now? Merlin?
BagginsPotterPevensie chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
whitecrossgirl chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
very sweet and the last line was perfect
wisa chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Cute. What a way for arthur to propose to gwen.
Kohimoana chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
That was soooo beautiful and quite elloquently Put! I loved it! thanks so much *smiles*Kohimoana
Magical Moo chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Aww. This story cheered me up a bit. ) Thanks