|Reviews for Insomnia – The whole story…|
| Rachel Garber chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
I just read through this one and honestly there is no way I would have guessed not the right answer, I just see no clues that it is Edward as the narrator Good drabbles nice to see them altogether
| Coldplaychic chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Awesome story . Your an excellent writer.
| samekraemer chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Loved it! Well done!
| Wordyma chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
HOT! Thank you for this one. My husband will thank you, too ; )
| angela.rose.142 chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Love this! Do more stories like this!
| Yulliah chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Oh I get the feeling... Soooooo well! How many times I've showed up for work late, later and latest! Simply because by the time I finally fell asleep, the alarm clock would go off an hour later!
And seriously, at that point, an airplane can land beside ya and you would just incorporate it in your dreams...
And people always go; Oh, well, perhaps you could try to do this or that... Na-uh! Don't ya think I've tried EVERYTHING in the past 12 years? hehe
I love the story... How it was written as well as what was written...
And I hope he'll be able to sleep from now on, eventhough I'm affraid this is only temporary relief... :(
Thanx for writing!
| Maxylicious chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
phew! now I need a smoke! lol
| Decadent Anarchy chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
This was so well written, and an absolute joy to read! Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us.
| dazzlingrockstar chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
Way awesome! I'm not fond of reading drabbles... Until they've been completed, until the story ends. I must say, I really enjoyed this piece. :)
| js18 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I just found this and I loved it. I only read completed fics so I'm bouncing in my seat now waiting for early bird to finish. It's on alert! Keep writing.
| twilightmenrhot chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
What a fun story. The early bits are so cleverly ambiguous and deceptive. Loved it.
| Origami Fangs chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
i read this again not only because i loved it the first time but also because i needed to send a review about it and feel bad for not reviewing it in the first place because it was definitely 's such a fab story! the build up of sexual tension drove me insane and when Jasper and Edward first got together i felt almost as relieved as they did! Thank you for writing! xx Cindy
| kellybear3 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Haha! I completely thought that Edward was the boss! Now I'm going to reread this knowing what I now know! Excellent!
| Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I so enjoyed rereading this all at once! If you'll remember, I'm one who thought the narrator to be Jasper. Now that I've read this envisioning Edward as the insomniac and Jasper as the boss I can read Early Bird properly. What an amazing story teller you are.
| simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
I def pictured the roles reversed. This was great! I will have to reread this again and picture thecharacters how you planned them. My lord this story is dam hot. Loved it. Then I will read the sequal. Melissa