Reviews for Saruman of many Devices
MiniHerc chapter 14 . 11/24/2023
I command this fic to rise from the dead!
scyfly chapter 12 . 5/10/2023
the amount of gun instruction in this story really is over the top, i think every new group of ppl that was introduced to guns got one. ofc this is needed but it just doesnt need to be written more then once
scyfly chapter 11 . 5/10/2023
835% im guessing you are trying to say with a 5% margin but in math thd notation of a slash means devide, in other words: 83% devided by -5%(negative 5)

or perhaps you meant is aswhich means 'plus minous', or 'more or less'
scyfly chapter 10 . 5/10/2023
lol i just realized something, in the war of the five armies the dwarves use chariots that shoot bolts faster then anything saruman has made. ofc those things are likely impossible to make, much like the swirlywirlys
scyfly chapter 9 . 5/10/2023
kinda stupid they didnt construct a telegram line next to the railroad, that is seriously primitive communication tech.

dont see the need for a station every 12km either though
scyfly chapter 8 . 5/10/2023
yeah this is one of those thing that always pissed me off in canon to. the enemy has sorcerers aplenty but the 'good' guys have to do with some elven made gifts and nerfed maia.

not the nummorians though, they mastered magic well enough, which naturally means by now everyone has forgotten how.

how does that make sense? its a good thing they all but left this out of the movies
scyfly chapter 6 . 5/10/2023
feels like the orcs reverse engineered that gun a little to quick
scyfly chapter 3 . 5/10/2023
werewolves were created by sauron not morgoth.
scyfly chapter 3 . 5/10/2023
the easterlings of the rhun have greater metal works then dale, allies of the dwarves? how does this sound logical?
scyfly chapter 2 . 5/10/2023
infighting is the reason middle earth is empty? no, it is the product of the dark plague that wiped out most of menkind from middle earth.

so the rohirim need to die but the dunlanders barbarians are alright? seems to me saruman is just picking up the desperate as followers
scyfly chapter 2 . 5/10/2023
what? dont orcs dislike the light and are greatly weakend by it? this means they have to have some kind of nightvision.

orcs are also corrupted elves, the corruption is what drives their cruelty, this would not suddenly change with uruk hai.

the execution of this concept is poorly done. little consideration of what already was and it totally disregards magic
scyfly chapter 1 . 5/10/2023
saruman is a bit of hypocrite here, whining about lack of innovation, this coming from the man who is probably eons old yet needed an outside voice telling him how to make steel.

what if he just taught humans instead of his orcs? what is this focus of his to destroy menkind?

it is a little lacking in motivation
scyfly chapter 1 . 5/10/2023
interesting, i find it a bit unlikely lotr has so little knowledge on alloys though. just look at the elves forged weapons or dwarven made stuff.
Cakeboss419 chapter 14 . 3/3/2023
A fantastic alternative direction to take the setting. I hope you get around to finishing this story eventually.
Star B chapter 4 . 1/24/2023
An incarnate Maiar?
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