Reviews for Saruman of many Devices
Junior VB chapter 10 . 6/6/2018
Esa fue una gran batalla.

Eowyn es muy valiente.

Boromir tiene razón. Ellos van a necesitar cuantos rifles pueden obtener.

Gandalf y Saruman han hecho las paces. Eso es bueno.
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That was a great battle.

Eowyn is very brave.

Boromir is right. They are going to need as many rifles as they can get.

Gandalf and Saruman have made peace. That is good.
Junior VB chapter 9 . 6/6/2018
Saruman se preocupa por sus soldados.
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Saruman cares for his soldiers.
Junior VB chapter 8 . 6/6/2018
Me gusta viajar en tren.

Es necesario hervir el agua antes de que sea seguro beberla.
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I like to travel by train.

It is necessary to boil the water before it's safe to drink.
Junior VB chapter 7 . 6/5/2018
Shadowfax es muy rápido.

Denethor está sorprendido por lo que las armas de fuego pueden hacer.
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Shadowfax is very fast.

Denethor is surprised by what guns can do.
Junior VB chapter 6 . 6/5/2018
El enemigo está fabricando armas de fuego.

Saruman quiere fabricar un avión.
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The enemy is making firearms.

Saruman wants to make an airplane.
Junior VB chapter 5 . 6/5/2018
Las armas de fuego son geniales.
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Firearms are great.
Junior VB chapter 4 . 6/5/2018
Los hombres de Rohan nunca tuvieron oportunidad de ganar.
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The men of Rohan never had a chance to win.
Junior VB chapter 3 . 6/5/2018
Eomer está cometiendo un error.

Siento pena por los enanos.
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Eomer is making a mistake.

I feel sorry for the dwarves.
Junior VB chapter 2 . 6/5/2018
Lurtz y compañia ayudaron a Arwen y Frodo.

Ese anillo es muy poderoso.
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Lurtz and company helped Arwen and Frodo.

That ring is very powerful.
Junior VB chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
Interesante idea.

Central le enseñó a Saruman sobre armas de fuego.

Gandalf debería tener una mente abierta.
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Interesting idea.

Central taught Saruman about firearms.

Gandalf should have an open mind.
Difdi chapter 14 . 5/12/2018
A minor quibble about terminology - NO ONE says "fire an arrow" or "fire a bow" in a pre-gunpowder civilization. They loose or launch arrows instead. The word fire only comes into use after guns are commonplace and used more frequently than bows are.

If you actually fired a bow, you'd destroy it.
Difdi chapter 8 . 5/10/2018
The best medium cavalry in Middle Earth, yes. But their equipment falls behind their doctrine and discipline, unfortunately. Just ensuring they had uniform lance lengths would turn them from great cavalry to incredible cavalry.
Difdi chapter 7 . 5/10/2018
Why would 89 be considered old for Denethor, when Men in Middle Earth live to 200 at about the same rate as people in our world live to 100? For us, 89 is old. For Denethor or Boromir, 89 is barely middle aged - the equivalent of a 45 year old man in our world.

Men of pure or near-pure Numenorean stock live longer than that, closer to how long Dwarves live. Aragorn would have a life expectancy closer to 400.
Guest chapter 14 . 2/11/2018
Is this still being written? One of the best lotr fan fics I've ever read and I'm glad you got me reading the general series! Even if this is the end I'm glad you started it
chucklestheewok chapter 14 . 1/28/2018
Like it. Hoping for more
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