|Reviews for Disappear!|
| utaharu chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
This made me laugh. I liked how they were just erased. Poof! XD
And some people actually do know how to make a good self insert fic and good OCs stories, so I do not think you are a hypocrite. :P
All in all, magnificent. )
| Princesa Lonni chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I laughed really hard because that was just plain funny!
| LambdaDash chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Haha! This is awesome! I have a confession to make: I like reading really bad Mary Sue fics just because they're so ridiculous. I especially like the long rambling paragraphs that intricately describe the physical appearance, lol. This made my day :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Pretty funny, though I have a bad feeling about the next OC. Just one question. Can Gohan still become a Super Saiyan 2?
I also hate Gary Stus/Mary Sues. They have no (or extremely few) bad qualities and just steal the spotlght.
Do you think anyone likes Gary Stus/Mary Sues?
~Have a great day, week, fortnight, month, whatever~
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Nicely done. The way you led up to the creator and the method of removal was also good. Nicely done.