Reviews for Star Fighters
nozomi-NN-chan chapter 24 . 4/26/2020
OMG this is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read, it's just so fantastic! Every single chapter was incredible and I couldn't get enough of it, how beautiful and complex Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is, the story of their world, the Uchihas, everything is perfect! Thank you so much for this.
Marisol rdz chapter 24 . 10/13/2019
Me encanto la historia de naruto y sasuke, lo unico que no me gusto fue la historia de sakura y sasuke, lo siento pero para mi sakura siempre ha sido una desgraciada por todo lo mal que se porto con naruto, siempre me parecio muy mala onda y muy pretenciosa.
IHadRedHair chapter 24 . 1/28/2019
I’m loving this Story. It is so beautiful written and has a lot of unexpected twists and turns than i can only adore it. Together with the writing style and the charakters it makes a great story even thought there is no porn scene which does make me a little sad but nonetheless a wonderful story
Kitsune chapter 24 . 10/19/2018
I had a raging suspicion in my single day binge read of this fic that my citrus desires would be tested towards dissapointment. But, I'd do it over and over and over again because the plot was that damn yummy...though a bit too sweet perhaps for my usual taste.
Not that I wouldn't mind, in the least, to find (someday) an epilogue of their bonding experience and telepathic link, or a hint that perhaps my disillusional grandeur at the possibility that Sasukes line of Uchiha might've been squashed during the revolution Because of some Jounin genetic dispositions unbeknownst to Sasuke but feared by the other side of the family line. Hm?
I'll just go be one in my imagination then.
Lily chapter 24 . 8/11/2018
I really enjoyed reading that:)
Lily chapter 1 . 8/10/2018
This is interesting!
colourmeimpresed chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
Simply one of the best fics I've read... You re pretty awesome :)
Naruhito chapter 24 . 3/2/2018
I really hope you can write an omake or even continue the story
Slvr chapter 24 . 10/24/2017
I've read so many fanfics but this one really stuck out to me! I've probably read it five times and I just love it particularly the way you created the universe and included the Jonin and pair bonding. It's always a pleasure to read. I would love a continuation but it also works well on its own. Thank you for sharing!
Julie chapter 24 . 7/19/2017
There were moments where I was definitely annoyed with each character both the story was enjoyable till the end. Thank you for writing this!
Julie chapter 9 . 7/18/2017
What! I felt like none of that made up for the previous chapter. Naruto basically raped Sasukes mind and used it to his hearts content. Wtff. Used and abused!
Lobstirrchwan chapter 24 . 12/10/2016
I apologize for messing up your perfect 500 review count but I just had to share my input on your story. I wanted to say that this was one of the best fics that I have read in a very long time. I am a big fan of sci-fi and this hit the mark perfectly. I normally prefer SasuNaru over NaruSasu, but this was just wonderful. You did a great job creating this new universe and yet still managed to include little key phrases from the Naruto universe by using the terms for ships and weapons and I found it very cleaver. I found myself unable to stop reading the entire time and was sad when it ended. Both Naruto and Sasuke were so likable with their sense of honor towards their people. The heated make out sessions were just that and left me wanting more. I do admit that I did want that extra chapter to see their pair-bonding just because all of the kissing was so good and so teasing. I would have also liked to see an extra scene with Shikamaru and Gaara to see their opinion on Sasuke. I'm assuming he was hearing them tele-speak to each other? I got the impression that even Jounin couldn't do that, but I could have been wrong. Couldn't people without Jinchuriki blood not be Jounin, or did I get that wrong too? Arg, there is just so must left unsaid! Anyway, I enjoyed this story so, so much! You are a very talented author. I could honestly see this being published and I've never said this about a fanfic before... So, yeah, thank you for your work! I really wish you had more NaruSasu fics in your archive.
yume76 chapter 24 . 5/31/2016
I really wasn't expecting the story to be so good. I really loved the depth and flow of this story. It really moved me to the point I couldn't stop thinking about it. I also loved how you put more priority to the emotional side of the love rather than the physical. It was truly refreshing. I especially loved how you wrapped up the story. Congratulations on writing such a beautiful story.
IcyLady chapter 24 . 5/31/2016
Wow! This was absolutely amazing! The idea, the plot, the intrigues! All that spiced with angst and romance. And in a believable sci-fi setting. Awesome, simply awesome.

I'm usually rather sceptic towards all mentions of "bonding" in stories, as they are usually just an excuse for sex scenes everywhere possible (and sometimes in places where they're really redundant). But you made it an excuse for loads of angst and kept the relationship part very slow and entangled with the individual fates of Sasuke and Naruto. You took the roles you created for them (really nicely done also) and made that bond of theirs twist them out of the most probable future, but not enough to make them go completely crazy and forget their sworn allegiances.

Also, it wasn't really just a romance story and you managed to keep Hinata's jealousy, as well as all the other obstacles, to a reasonable level. Thankfully (thank you so much!) there was none of the "typical" romance scenes, dunno: Sasuke walking in on Hinata forcing Naruto in a compromising position and of course misunderstanding the situation. Thankfully, the physical part of their relationship didn't overshadow the plot. Plus, where you did put some hotter scenes, it was really well done.

On that note, I found it a eally nice touch that Sasuke could overpower Naruto in a physical fight, giving him at least something in which he was better: it balanced the powers a tiny bit, where Sasuke risked to find himself thoroughly inadequate (I did expect him to lose, since Naruto was portrayed as such a superhero-godlike character in a way).

This little hint that Sasuke might be fit to be a Jounin, thankfully kept to just that and not overshadowing the story, is like a small flicker of hope that he could really find himself in his new life. That was also a really nice touch.

Right, I could keep going ;) But I think you get the point, right? I really loved the story!
jj chapter 24 . 3/19/2016
re read still love it to peices
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