Reviews for Prevented Powers
Danielle Domain chapter 5 . 2/10/2014
Make chapters and have more Reed I mean c'mon no one have reed mostly Johnny
McM chapter 5 . 3/17/2013
invented his own time machine .He doesnt need to steal one didnt you read the comics ?
Guap chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
Cool. Ae u gonna continue this? u need to.
Guap chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Cool.
Mafia chapter 5 . 7/31/2012
Please continue this story.
Mafia chapter 4 . 7/31/2012
Epic shit.
Mafia chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
"Creamy back?" "Voluptuous vixens?" Big ass words! Great chapter though!
Mafia chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
They say Sue is more powerful, but that nigga Johnny can go supernova! Way better than a lame ass force field.
Mafia chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Cold shit.
Vigatus chapter 5 . 5/1/2012
I think you have a great story in the development but you need to put more into it. I find the chapters rather short and lacking in detail. You should also separate your writing into paragraphs when needed especially when you use dialog. Also try to use different vocabulary. Instead of having whores I think Dr. Doom would have concubines. I am writing this to help you as I think you could have a really good story here.
Jokergirl chapter 4 . 12/28/2011
Im not tring to be on your nuts or anything, but this stor gets better and better.
Jinno chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
This whole story shows promise. Update soon.
Chris Wright chapter 3 . 11/21/2011
Please update soon.
Chris Wright chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
I personally think Invisible Woman is the most powerful of them.
Chris Wright chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Cool.