Reviews for Broken Lullaby
Harrigan chapter 12 . 9/17
What a wild ride! And thoroughly satisfying in so many ways! I'm so glad I found this, even if it's almost 8 years old!
trscrny chapter 12 . 8/3
What a terrific story. Even though I'm not a Deeks fan, I really liked the scene with Deeks giving Callen first aid not only for his injuries but for his wounded soul as well. I love multi layered stories like this and you handled it all so very well. Thank you for sharing. I realize you published this several years ago, but I only just discovered it. So, hope you get this review and my thanks to you for writing and posting the story.
Maria chapter 12 . 9/22/2018
A really excellent story...I really loved it...pleased it was finished too ,as it doesn't say it is...very good...more NCIS LA please...
ucialum85 chapter 7 . 11/12/2016
Best Deeks and Sam scene I've ever read. I wish they would have done this on the show. Callen is aloof and distant with Deeks but they really have so much in common. Well done.
Dramamama5 chapter 12 . 3/31/2016
good story. I like when the story ends without turning the team into blubbering fools. You managed that. Good work.
giococcinella chapter 12 . 11/20/2015
this story is awesome, thank you so much for writing it! You did an amazing job!
JaniceS chapter 12 . 12/19/2014
I'm not sure how I missed this gem. Wow, what an unbelievable adventure. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop. This is top notch ... thank you for the great ride!
ananova chapter 12 . 10/29/2013
Really liked this fic. I had a feeling Kimball was going to end up being the bad guy from the beginning. Glad Callen finally got some closure and was able to talk to Sam, clear the air. One thing, that whole not waiting for the bomb squad? Usually Callen's the one telling Sam to wait for the bomb squad while Sam tries to disarm it, it's happened in a couple of the episodes. So that's a bit of a role reversal. Still, I really loved this whole fic, thanks for sharing.
knirbenrots chapter 3 . 6/1/2013
Have I told you before how I love this story? Rereading it at the moment, great!
fanficalicious chapter 12 . 3/10/2013
Great story! Love the connection between Sam & callen. Thanks for sharing.
IFeelPossessed chapter 12 . 3/5/2013
Excellent story, thoroughly enjoyed it all. Not read too much fanfiction, but this pretty much reads like an episode of NCIS LA actually plays...
knirbenrots chapter 12 . 1/13/2013
Breathing out... I breathed in, chapters before this last one. What a great story Elle, I loved it. Thank you so much!
SnoopGirl69 chapter 12 . 12/23/2012
Great ending to this amazing story!
SnoopGirl69 chapter 11 . 12/23/2012
Yay! Callen diffused the bomb :)
SnoopGirl69 chapter 10 . 12/23/2012
The monster is gone! That was a great fight scene :)
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