Reviews for she was slightly
Tahira chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
That was so beautiful and deep. I've always thought Theo's character has potential
hawkeyeforever chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
I like the insight into the aftermath in the Slytherin's POV. Happy Writing:)
xshedreamsinredx chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
That was heart breaking, you have me shipping Theo/Pansy from this time onward.
Linnn chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
You are a wonderful writer. So poignant and so fearlessly honest.
Orienter chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Brilliant, as usual.
Sunset Whispers chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I really liked this and loved how Theo feels something for Pansy but its sad that they can never be together.

Well done.

Mrs B
stars shine out chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Beautiful, love it!
AnotherStupidNickname chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Excellent characterisation.

I loved this so much. It's nice to see the other side of the Slytherins, the one that isn't perfect, beautiful and renowned. And how fears actually make us who we are.
keep my issues drawn chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Oh gosh, I really loved this piece.

I don't think I've read a fanfiction with Pansy or Theo as a main character before, but I really liked this. It was so heartbreaking, and angsty, and what made it even more sad was that Theo was resigned to the fact that they couldn't be together. I wish they could've tried...

Your writing is just so real. Never stop writing :'D
Jemennuie chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
This is a great piece, one of my favs I'd say. The writing style flows easily and is poetic, and your description of Pansy and Theo seems accurate yet intriguing. I like how you displayed Pansy as having accepted her fall from grace (marrying Goyle willinlgy) because it's a different from how she's normally portrayed. My only constructive criticism comment is that it seemed a bit odd to me that Theo's father was around; being a Death Eater, I would have thought he would have been arrested after the Battle of Hogwarts.

Anyway, magnificent one-shot.
kel.kel.153 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
This is such a cute story! I felt so bad for Theo and Pansy at the end...

I hope he's happy with Greengrass, and that Goyle won't be Goyle.
VampHime chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
My heart hurts for Pansy for the first time.
waterlit chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
This was a heartfelt story, and beautifully written too (:
nNOPE NO PE NOE P EPN OPE chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
This is absolutely gorgeous. You have a way of painting such a vivid image with your writing, and it comes across as so effortlessly done and beautiful. Well done! c:
SpiritedWind chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Great story! I rather like you DaphneTheo stories...but this was great. Never been a fan of Pansy, but you made this so real and amazing. Great job! :D
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