Reviews for SYOC: In the Wake of a Hero
InvaderVyn chapter 4 . 11/30/2011
You're not good. You're amazing! Great chappie and i lOok forward to the next.
TankTheAuthor chapter 4 . 11/29/2011
I think it is a good beginning. It set the story's background. Can't wait for next chapter.
TheCat15 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Name- Zora Patterson (name on birth certificate; this is not the name she grew up with or that she goes by)

Age- 15

Nickname- Zero (goes by this, grew up as Zero)

Weapon- A katana (strange for a greek, right?) that she had made for her out of celestial bronze.

Birthday- February 29 (2/29/96 - actually happened as 1996 WAS a leap year)

Personality- shy, quiet, doesn't speak much. Stealthy, fast, can be "invisible" or just un-noticeable

History- Grew up on the streets, her mum abandoned her when she was little.

Godly parent (If they have one) - Daughter of Chaos (god of nothingness)

Mortal parent/family- Bliss Hope Patterson (teen mother of Zero; demigod daughter of Lethe, the god of forgetfulness)

Hair color/style- her hair is long and black, it's straight.

Eye color- her eyes are large, round, and dark silver/grey

Height/weight- she's tall (5'9"), and weighs 158 lbs

fatal flaw- she doesn't have a side to battles, and usually doesn't care who wins/loses

Talents- she can make people forget they ever saw her, and make their mind go blank, can EASILY control the mist

Likes- living

Dislike- dying

Romance (Bi sexual and gay are also options here)- no romance

Anything else- she seems really indifferent to everything. that is because she is. it is mostly how she grew up.
Crystalyn chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
Agnis Presege was a quiet, shy girl, but at times she had a witted tong. She was all the way from Naxos, Greece. Her father had died in a mysterious fire(accidently caused by herself). Before she knew it she was sent off to a foreign camp and claimed by her mother Hestia.

Agnis's skin had been kissed by the hot sun from the Naxos beaches that she would miss dearly. Her forest-like eyes scorched her fellow mates souls; while her dark brown wavy hair, that almost was as dark as the night lapped in their faces

I hope this is a better description :)
Crystalyn chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
If your still looking for a charecter here's one. Agnis Presage/Hopkins (take your pick. Presage means visions just so you know. Agnis is a lonely girl all the way from Naxos, Greece. Her father and sibblings died in a mysterious fire. She is a shy, but shocking girl at times with a quick witted tong. Her skin has been kissed by the hot sun from her days on the beach; Her long-wavy dark brown hair - that is almost as dark as the night glistens in the sunlight as she passes by. While her forest-like eyes scorch anyones soul who make eye connect. . .

you can pick her godly parent.

Agnis means pure by the way
movies798 chapter 4 . 11/29/2011
Awesome chapter!
JadeDragon220 chapter 4 . 11/29/2011
Loved the new chapter! Probably because Jill was one of the first people mentioned so...yeah:D Honestly, I don't mind the length of the chapter, the content is good and it flows nicely, you're WAY better at formatting then I am. Love how you're writing the Ocs, especially mine:D Love the whole Blackjack replacing Rudolph thing and the love between the Hermes kids. Gotta love 'em!:D

I won't lie, when I saw the little email in my inbox announcing that you had updated I had a mini heart attack. You are SUCH a good writer, and I'm loving the update speed:D

Still, Update as fast as possible! I'm totally addicted!:D
RainingStrawberries chapter 4 . 11/29/2011

That was perfect xD
Mrs.NicoDiAngelo42 chapter 3 . 11/28/2011
update! plz! Even though it was short, it was really good!
InvaderVyn chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Awesome! Vyn is a MAIN, woohooo!
JadeDragon220 chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Awesome story:D The writing is good and it didn't take you too long to get the submissions over with and the story started, which I am seriously thankful for:D Sometimes when I submit an OC to a story like this it takes the person FOREVER to update again.

P.S: Yay! My OC is a main character! This brightened up a bad day for me, so thanks:D
on the backs of angels chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Epic chapter.

(On a side note, in a review sometimes caps is the only way to emphasize a word when that needs to happen)

Anywho, great chapter! Can't wait for more.
Rosewolf the MothSlayer chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Yay! Really good so far.
TankTheAuthor chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
Awesome! Can't wait to see the story!
movies798 chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
Sweet! Nice prologue update soon please!
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