Reviews for Toil and Trouble
tff000 chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
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tff000 chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
:)
tff000 chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
wonder where they will go
Julia-S77 chapter 6 . 11/24/2011
Loved this story and the happy ending! Xx
Julia-S77 chapter 5 . 11/24/2011
Trust your Bella to be so forthright and ask Edward if he wanted her as his wife!

Great chapter , loved it xx
Julia-S77 chapter 4 . 11/24/2011
I am really living this fic! The cullens are so caring and Edward likes bella just a little bit!

Great chapter, loved it xx
Julia-S77 chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
Poor Bella being tortured just for associating with the cullens. Of course Edward came to save her!

Great chapter, loved it xx
Julia-S77 chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
That was a great but unexpected surprise! Great chapter, loved it xx
Allknowing Alice chapter 6 . 11/24/2011
Such a cute story! Loved it
jojobear33 chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
great!
dag21 chapter 4 . 11/23/2011
As always again, you are amazing. I still can't believe you aren't more popular. I really enjoy your writing, you are my fav author.
bethi13212 chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
Wonderful!
Lurecyka chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
Wow ! That was a such a good story. I love it !
Princess Mishawaka chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
so glad Charlie came to find the Cullens and Bella. So glad that they will settle away from that monster minister.

Good lemon and in those times I don't think women were supposed to feel anything in sex or they were considered wanton. My mother told me it was a job that had to be done. Oh well I am glad I live now and my own children have more of a modern living.

Very good writing and a very good story.
KeeWit chapter 5 . 11/23/2011
Good chapter!
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