Reviews for Toil and Trouble
Julia-S77 chapter 3 . 11/24/2011
Poor Bella being tortured just for associating with the cullens. Of course Edward came to save her!

Great chapter, loved it xx
Julia-S77 chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
That was a great but unexpected surprise! Great chapter, loved it xx
Allknowing Alice chapter 6 . 11/24/2011
Such a cute story! Loved it
jojobear33 chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
dag21 chapter 4 . 11/23/2011
As always again, you are amazing. I still can't believe you aren't more popular. I really enjoy your writing, you are my fav author.
bethi13212 chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
Lurecyka chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
Wow ! That was a such a good story. I love it !
Princess Mishawaka chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
so glad Charlie came to find the Cullens and Bella. So glad that they will settle away from that monster minister.

Good lemon and in those times I don't think women were supposed to feel anything in sex or they were considered wanton. My mother told me it was a job that had to be done. Oh well I am glad I live now and my own children have more of a modern living.

Very good writing and a very good story.
KeeWit chapter 5 . 11/23/2011
Good chapter!
berdb chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
There were so many injustices done by men *speaking for God* - God gives everyone their gifts. As well as the choice to do good or bad with those gifts.

The witch hunts was one of the worst occurrence in history, yet it gets brushed under the proverbial rug and shrugged off as "that's the way it was".

Other recognized injustices in history, be it over race, color, creed has been acknowledged and mourned. I have yet to see a holiday for the women burned alive at the stakes.

Things that make you go Hmmm...
KeeWit chapter 2 . 11/23/2011
Wow. That was unexpected.
KeeWit chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Good beginning!
Teresa R chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
That was a great story thank you.
Teresa R chapter 5 . 11/23/2011
It is a good thing Bella knows what she wants.
sujari6 chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
Love the ending. Great story.
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