|Reviews for like s a n d in the h o u r g l a s s|
| RSF love chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
This is really sad but romantic at the same time. The descriptions of the beach are gorgeous. It's a very poetic piece, the words have a lilting quality, and the three lines make a sort of echo - if that makes any sense. It's a really mysterious piece, I love what you can gauge about their characters from the words. It's a really perfect length for a drabble, too. It makes me really curious, haha. Brilliantly written, the imagery was amazing. xxx
| she was the book thief chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
beautiful, beautiful, rae. poor dom. i love the lines of text that are separate from the story and the rhyming and :) and poor lysander. i like your headcanon of them. dom is so insightful, i love her character.
| singing like blue chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
This is a beautiful little drabble, and I really liked it. Your text makes me feel like this is poetic, it probably is. :D It was a beautiful story, and I liked your use of repetition.
| WeasleySeeker chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
This is so beautiful, Rae. Your images are wonderful, and I love all the description throughout of the beach, that was especially gorgeous. I liked the three lines and how they're sort of like an introduction, then a twist, then a conclusion. And it was so heartbreaking that Lysander had to turn his back on Dom, aww. Keep writing!
| Macbeth Mouse chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
This is sad, and so romantic. I wonder why it is they can't be together, though? Perhaps I'm just dull, and didn't understand the meaning.
But this is really great, just like what I've read before! I love the visualisations you put into my head; it really paints the picture of desperation.
| marniemadden chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Really really nice! I loved this — the characterisation of their relationship was very believable and moving. Great job, keep writing :)
| felines chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I love how you have those three lines! Especially the last one - that line just seemed to me like some kind of finale.
| suffocating lies chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
I reallyreally liked this. I like the how other members of Dominique's family is incorperated into this story as well as the last line.
Thanks for the dedication and sorry for the late review!
| shimmeringbubbles chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
except the words are all clumped together a bit, and it's just me, but I find it harder to read like that.
But overall a good effort :D
| sydneysages chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Oh Rae, love, this was amazing!
I love how you wrote it and with the beach in it; i just absolutely adored it!
this was just so so so amazingly cute and amazingly gorgeous! xxxxxxxxx