Reviews for Day of the Bolo
Independent Dude chapter 8 . 1/26/2013
Though I don't know the 2nd source material at all, I liked this as a Bolo story. One thing: I would drop the line about getting snacks to offset the blood loss. It seems a little too detailed.
It might have come off better coming from one of the Bolos.
cklammer chapter 7 . 12/17/2011
Nice very plot line - there is always something unexpected.

The whole tale is very well written - I do not see any difference between this story and the original, big-name-author stuff. Nice achievement.

More, More.
cklammer chapter 6 . 12/14/2011
Excellent one-on-one bolo action.

The navy will mess things up as usual ...

Nice chapter.
cklammer chapter 5 . 12/8/2011
Very nicely done.
cklammer chapter 4 . 12/8/2011
Did a lawyer write this?
cklammer chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
Nice detective work.

As the cat does is not likely to mass 18kg ... kill all pets.

As Landing is is thoroughly contaminated by now - sterilize it.

Nice chapter.
cklammer chapter 2 . 12/8/2011
This is getting more and more interesting.
cklammer chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Cool plot idea.

Starts nicely.