|Reviews for Day of the Bolo|
| Independent Dude chapter 8 . 1/26/2013
Though I don't know the 2nd source material at all, I liked this as a Bolo story. One thing: I would drop the line about getting snacks to offset the blood loss. It seems a little too detailed.
It might have come off better coming from one of the Bolos.
| cklammer chapter 7 . 12/17/2011
Nice very plot line - there is always something unexpected.
The whole tale is very well written - I do not see any difference between this story and the original, big-name-author stuff. Nice achievement.
| cklammer chapter 6 . 12/14/2011
Excellent one-on-one bolo action.
The navy will mess things up as usual ...
| cklammer chapter 5 . 12/8/2011
Very nicely done.
| cklammer chapter 4 . 12/8/2011
Did a lawyer write this?
| cklammer chapter 3 . 12/8/2011
Nice detective work.
As the cat does is not likely to mass 18kg ... kill all pets.
As Landing is is thoroughly contaminated by now - sterilize it.
| cklammer chapter 2 . 12/8/2011
This is getting more and more interesting.
| cklammer chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
Cool plot idea.