|Reviews for Love will find a way|
| TheGoldman chapter 3 . 2/11
Ernie's a Hufflepuff, isn't he?
| Kai chapter 12 . 12/22/2013
I like the story so far.
You took the teenage angsty shit Rowling left us with in the sixth book with that crap idea of a big happy Weasley family in her head and turned it around to the couple everyone wanted after the fifth book, and soon enough to not make it awkward, too.
That Harry REALLY studied potions in order to understand them and Hermione REALLY got into his book was the important plot that solved the problems Rowling constructed. (And it being Lily's book was a very nice touch!)
That Hermione finally noticed what an arsehole Ron really is was the best thing that could have happened.
Thanks a lot for that! It was very well developed.
But there's a "but". In this chapter, well, ...
There might be a teensiest, tiniest cultural difference between India and Germany, so perhaps it's normal for you even if inconceivable for me.
"The Granger hoped that Hermione didn't do something inappropriate."
No. Just NO. She's of age. Period. What she does, especially with her body is completely her decision. Hermione is not her parent's property to have them decide for her.
Not as a child, although educational purposes should set limits to a kid's free will. But especially not as grown up.
She can shag Harry's brain out and the elder Grangers have no say in that. She can get pregnant and it's only her decision without ANY person having a right for input, not even the father.
And she doesn't need her parents blessing. It's nice for her to ask for it, but she can do whatever she wants disregarding whatever her parents think of it.
And as residents of Scotland for ten months a year they can immediately marry, whenever they want, without parental consent.
It's not for the elder Grangers to approve or disapprove ANYTHING.
It would be like that in Germany, but as well in Britain.
BTW: I still like the story...
| Penny is wise chapter 15 . 9/26/2013
| jd chapter 15 . 7/9/2013
Well this one is really disappointing compared to this author's other stories.
| ohhhdear chapter 15 . 6/8/2013
Well conceived and written until the last few chatters, which were basically a "I'm tired of writing this story" regurgitation of Deathly Hallows. Very disappointing ending, and I'd expected better, considering the imaginative and energetic earlier chapters. If I had my mother's 1st grade grading stamps, you'd get the frowny face that said "you can do tester than this!".
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 9 . 6/2/2013
I'm thinking that Harry's a Nundu!
| Filmsmith chapter 15 . 2/22/2013
Good story, but I'd have to agree with others about the rushed ending. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Keep up the good work!
| izzyp120 chapter 15 . 2/19/2013
| ak chapter 15 . 1/8/2013
les black étaient riche, non?
| Mionefan chapter 10 . 1/8/2013
An ending to the chapter that I should have foreseen. Shame on me for missing the "feminine hand" reference earlier. Lily instead of Snape as the author was quite unexpected.
| Angeline G. McFellou chapter 15 . 12/7/2012
Hey cool fic!
Strangely the end, but beauty, was very good the way it was rewritten congratulations.
I loved the fic continues like this, please.
PS: I'm Brazilian, so please disregard the bad grammar / spelling, because I'm reading / commenting on your fic by Google Translate.
| serenityselena chapter 15 . 11/26/2012
I couldn't stop reading it until I reached its end :)
| Joeygx chapter 15 . 11/16/2012
I had very ambivalent feelings after reading this so I must leave you with a mixed review.
Your story wasnt bad, it was just pretty rushed.
The writing skills are superb, the storyline is thought through and your Harry is likeable.
You introduced your characters nicely, clear on the subject who fills which role (Harry-Hero, Ron-Idiot etc).
Your Hermiones obsession with Ron goes too far in this story. After all you made Ron much worse than in canon and Hermione is even more obsessed with him than in JKRs books. That just doesnt make sense. But at least you tried to explain it.
Then theres the matter how Ron would react when Hermione and Harry start distancing themselves from him. It seems as if you skipped that part altogether. These are the big critique points for me but there are a few more, little ones: Rushed ending, Teenagers who sleep in a bed together half naked but dont do anything/wait with sex until marriage without any religious backround (they just dont have sex because its better that way? yeah right, very realistic nowadays).
Always watch out for logic holes, if youre introducing a specific idea, thats totally fine but make sure the characters have very good reasons for why they act in a certain way and dont forget to make that reason GOOD!
Now, that may sound worse than it is, it just annoys me, when someone who has a great writing style and a good sense of grammar and spelling fucks a story up by rushing through a good plot (and worse, rushing through an ending!) and leaving logic questions out in the open.
| Mmars69 chapter 15 . 7/20/2012
Thank you for another wonderful story. Don't stop writing.
| akasanta chapter 15 . 7/5/2012
Very enjoyable story. Cheers! :D