Reviews for Jack's POV
Lauriesf chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Of course, it's just the beginning! How come you never wrote more about it?
Schatze8210 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Love the story line...lots of possibilities for more!
countrygirl2005 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Cute, next story please, they have to get together.
ziva2012 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Well done! I can imagine Jack thinking exactly what you have written. It's as if you were channeling him! I know you are a shipper, and you prefer to write AU stories, but this piece should please readers who like only canon stories. As for the technical aspects of your work, your sentence structure and punctuation could use some work, but other than that you did a very good job. Bravo, my friend!