|Reviews for White Murder|
| Starbird474 chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
Hope you update this soon. I'm really likin' it :3
| Scraggles chapter 2 . 1/21/2012
I'm interested as to how this turns out. My only complaint is of some awkward expositions (sentence structure that is grammatically correct but contextually confusing/off) and some spelling issues here and there - nothing bad, overall comprehensible. Just keep an eye on how your writing sounds and you should be alright.
Now, onto the plot... I'm not going to guess that Sazh's chocobo did this, and I'm hoping Snow didn't randomly fall on Fang's lance, so I think I'll venture a guess as to Menrva, that white owl thing. Do I get a cookie? Anyway, Fang's reaction was humorous, but I'm not sure Lightning's is entirely in character. She's due some more coldness and bitch-fit in my opinion, just to make it clear that she still is "Lightning" Farron, not insert Lightning's real name here.
| KiraKandra chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
It's really an interesting plot, look forward to the next chapter !
| toastbox chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
So... killed by Sazh's chocobo? Rofl! :D
| Pirkam-Powder-Pie chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Do you really believe that Snow killed Hope's mom? :(