|Reviews for Unity: The Long Struggles|
| Beyogi chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Interesting story, I'd like to read more.
Thank you for writing,
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
I don't agree that the TEC is a better plot device it may be a more relatable one but their is just as easily enough plot and culture behind the Vasari and Advent for instance the raw emotion of once being ruler but now being prey And having a feeling like they must redeem and reclaim who they are of the Vasari or the feeling of interconnectivity with the hive in a state of independent thought and action yet being part of a single mind at the same time of the advent
| Lavasharks chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
-Sharky totally did as he was told.
| Dragon Emperor Geon chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Quite the engaging story, I have to say. everything you've come up with has seemed to intrigue me, and urge me to read. You, sir, have done well. I enjoy reading your stories. You must be proud. :)