Reviews for The Little Urashima
Neferius chapter 6 . 7/5/2012
Highly ridiculous and just plain cheesy. Kinda hard to read at times and it was too fast. Events seemed to just speed by. I'm sure its alot smoother in your original language. At least it kept me entertained and that's what matters. So good work.
Neferius chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Yeah, the translation isn't the best but, its far from unreadable. The script format also doesnt work well. Despite this, it's a good story so far and has alot of potential.
Samhan chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
I like Happy ending!
Samhan chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
Nice Job
Samhan chapter 4 . 11/26/2011
different girlfriend, no hit him for no reason, violence but lovely with him
Samhan chapter 3 . 11/26/2011
What kind of girl is she
Samhan chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
a girl hate women, I know women hate men & same goes for opposite, but this the first I hear it
Cheshire Cat chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
A good start ...

You should get a native English-speaking proofreader, though, as some of the translations are not quite correct.

Also, the script-style of writing never works as well as proper dialogue, as you end up mssing out all the additional descirptive text of the environment and reactions.
Earl Colby Pottinger chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
You must continue this.

Keitaro with someone to protect is a diffirent person.
Samhan chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Keitaro made love when he was a teen, isn't that a crime?