Reviews for Sparks Fly
ScarletBlackberry chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
This was a very fluffy one shot. You did a good job toying with Serenity's personality, it suited her quite well. Although, the emotion seemed rushed. You are definitely getting better at writing one-shots, though. :)
FarewellNow chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
AW! This was adorable! Nice one-shot! :)
BlackRoseDragonCK chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Awww, so sweet! I love it. Very well done _!
Namara Jane Knight chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
It was a very cute story, but where on earth did you get those lyrics from? There were several wrong lines. The song's lyrics are as follows:

The way you move is like a full on rain storm

And I'm a house of cards

You're the kind of reckless that should send me running

but I kinda know that I won't get far

You stood there in front of me

just close enough to touch

Close enough to hope you couldn't see what I was thinking of

Drop everything now

Meet me in the pouring rain

Kiss me on the sidewalk

Take away the pain

cause I see sparks fly

whenever you smile

Get me with those green eyes baby

As the lights go down

Give me something that'll haunt me

When you're not around

Cause I see sparks fly

Whenever you smile

My mind forgets to remind me

you're a bad idea

You touch me once

and it's really something

You find I'm even better than you imagined I would be

I'm on my guard from the rest of the world

But with you, I know it's no good

And I could wait patiently

But I really wish you would

Drop everything now

Meet me in the pouring rain

Kiss me on the sidewalk

Take away the pain

cause I see sparks fly

whenever you smile

Get me with those green eyes baby

As teh lights go down

Give me something that'll haunt me

when you're not around

cause I see sparks fly

whenever you smile

I run my fingers through your hair

And watch the lights go wild

Just keep on keeping you eyes on me

It's just wrong enough to make it feel right

And lead me up the staircase

won't you whisper soft and slow

I'm captivated by you baby

like a fireworks show

drop everything now

meet me in the pouring rain

kiss me on the sidewalk

take away the pain

cause sparks fly

whenever you smile

get me with those green eyes baby

as the lights go down

give me something that'll haunt me

when you're not around

cause I see sparks fly

whenever you smile

cause the sparks fly

whenever you smile

and the sparks fly

oh, baby, smile

and the sparks fly

Those are teh correct lyrics to the song. I have no idea where you got yuors from, but they are not right. Fix that little problem and the story will be much better.
Emichan and PhoenixWarrior chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Emichan: dawwwwwwwwwww! So cute . Anyways nice choice of song, and it doesn't feel as rushed as Can You Feel the Love Tonight. Your formatting for oneshots is getting better too. Keep up the good work. ( By the way, the nice thing about Ryou and Serenity is that we don't see them that often in the show, so their personalities can be stretched a bit. But still nice job keeping them fairly canon. )