|Reviews for Becoming Visible|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/4
Sooooo hot. I’ve read this again and again
| DongzhimenwaiDarling chapter 1 . 7/30
I loved this!
| DutchScorRosefan chapter 1 . 8/4/2015
I'm revisiting some of your old stories because I LOVE your penmanship and your smut, please write another, preferably epic one...
| aylody chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
One of the ScoRose smut story that I loved. Probably best!
I loved how you captured every single tensed, lust and excitement in one beautiful shot story. It's such a well written that I read it for twice (and maybe more, to think I actually put this story at my favorite story). This idea was so original but made me think that how can she exactly give him head when she wrapped by invisibility cloak. Otherwise, it's perfectly, beautifully written without so much dialogue and perfectly describing the exact moment. And I just love Scorpius and Rose character here. But, truthfully, the ending was a lil bit lack. Dunno, it's just awkward when I imagine these two smile at each other in the end, but somehow I felt a lil bit fluff too.
Argh, dunno. but clearly, I love this! Can you come out on another ScoRose oneshot romance smut again? I just love your writing! And probably, I will read your series story of ScoRose when I have some times. Either way, love it love it love it "3
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
this was fun to read, cheers
| caspasta chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
great idea and great story :3
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
| BatKate chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
I really like this story a lot. My only criticism is the mechanics of the cloak and what Rose can do under it. For instance, you describe her kissing his skin while she's still under the cloak, but it's confusing whether she's lifting up the cloak a little to kiss him or if the fabric barrier is there. It's kind of like that for most of the story, where it seems like the cloak would get in the way.
| saraelena chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
I loved it hehe ;D
| mspstar97 chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
That was beautiful. Great job!
| TrulyHeIsMine chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I love this story!
| pica5509 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
| KenLuverDH chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
Rose is fantastic in this story. I love how she goes for what she wants. This was a great one shot!
| jenmo4981 chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I almost turned away at the beginning because I thought it was gonna get a little stalker/creepy.
So glad I stuck with it! Super hot.
| Maddy chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This is actually my favourite smut oneshot fanfiction of all time. It is so incredible!