|Reviews for I listened|
| Chriss-Meister chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
Wow...just, wow. That was so amazing! I am very glad you decided to do the two-shot instead of the one. This was absolutely beautiful. I had just bought this book from my friend's recommendation a good month ago and adored it. I was thinking about it this morning and was curious if there was any fanfiction about it up on the site. This is the first one I read and I am glad. Thank you for the wonderful story
| riyensong chapter 2 . 4/10/2013
Just finished reading the book and I loved this! :)
| Raderson chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Great story! Loved it 3 :)
| blalala chapter 2 . 1/17/2012
Aww, this chapter was so sweet, please make another romance story about Owen's pv with romance and of course the pair has to be Annabel.
| blalala chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Finally there's point of view of Owen! I like it
| Cheaward chapter 2 . 12/21/2011
I enjoyed this and think you did a great job with Owen:)
| InkWeaverabc chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
Well, this one was a bit longer, so you know, I saw a few more mistakes. Here are the ones I spotted:
'Girls, they're and enigma'
'He raped her mom' Erm, lol. What you need to do here (and if you fix nothing else, definiately do this one!) is to put a comma between 'her' and 'mom' and give the word mom a capital M. So it doesn't look like you're saying that Will Cash raped Annabel Greene's mum... XD It needs to be like this: 'He raped her, Mom.'
And I think that's it... plus all the words in bold. There's nothing technically wrong with them, I just don't like them :D
Apart from those things, I liked this chapter too. Not as much as the other, but it was good! Well done :)
| InkWeaverabc chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
that was really sweet :) I loved it. Owen is so awesome... and he says it was bad that he punched Will, but really, i wouldn't have thought half as well of him if he hadn't ;)
One thing I would say, though: I'm not sure about that big bold EARTH in the middle. To have it in bold type looks rather un-professional, so if I were you, I'd change it.
But apart from that one thing, a great little ficlet!
| vvvv1123 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
this is amazing (: keep writingg please!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Oh cool! You captured that scene in his perspective great! Can't wait for the second half (and more hopefully, because I can't get enough of Just Listen fics and there needs to be more to read!) Thanks for posting this :)