Reviews for Deception
silverXskull chapter 6 . 8/17/2017
You're making me tear up stop.
Guy Fawkess chapter 29 . 5/13/2017
don't redo it. just continue and finish the story
PKWolf014 chapter 1 . 5/12/2017
Whoop! THIS! IS! AWESOME! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! I AM SO HAPPY! XD This story is actually one of the reasons I started writing Fanfiction. And yeah, from the original chapter to this one, I can defiantly see a difference, your skills have improved a lot. I'm really impressed. I really like the way you portray Hiccup and Toothless's relationship. Some people write it so...awkwardly. Like the dragons are pets but Toothless is right, they're partners-and that's how you write it. It feels so natural in this story. This series always makes me so happy.

Anyway, I can also see a bit of difference in Nightflight this version too. I really liked that you didn't have her recognize Toothless on the spot. That did seems little off last time. It shows that its been a loooong time since they've seen each other. Anyway, yep, I'm totally excited that you've decided to re-write this. Its a story close to my heart. ;) Good luck with future chapters!
PKWolf014 chapter 29 . 5/5/2017
I am interested! I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. It is like, awesome. I really would be totally into seeing you re-write this if you decided to. So yeah, you can count on my support, Kat!
Sun Fury chapter 29 . 5/4/2017
You have a gift at writing.
TN Sarah chapter 29 . 5/4/2017
I would love to see this story rewritten, I enjoyed it the first time though I have to agree with your comments that parts of it were weird and disjointed
PKWolf014 chapter 28 . 12/14/2016
THIS WAS AMAZING! *Squeals* I absolutely HATE stories where Toothless ditches Hiccup for a female Night Fury but this has to be one of my favorite Fanfiction maybe stories and that is saying something. It was so well written and keeps the bond between Hiccup and Toothless as a center point. I absolutely love (I'm not sure why) the part where Toothless attacks Hiccup but then remembers-it fit together so well! I am utterly impressed and need to go grab another box of tissues as I bawl my eyes out. I never cry when reading and for this story I have managed to recreate the Pacific Ocean in my room. Again, I applaud you. Well done! This. Is. Epic!
Artwing7 chapter 28 . 2/9/2016
Good job! I cried so so much in this story its ridiculous! This is probably my favorite story!

For theme songs I could only come up with Nightflights and Hiccups.

So for Hiccup,
Faded by Alan Walker, it just reminds me of him in this story because he needs Toothless and he's wondering, "Where are you now?" And because he cant find him he's fading.

For Nightflight
Rolling in the deep by Adele.
This just reminds me of her, not sure why, by after reading this, I cant listen to that song without thinking of her.

Yay! Good job!
Artwing7 chapter 22 . 2/9/2016
I rewrote the lyrics posted at the top of the page, to fit better with the story:)

You looked down
The horror across your face,
Memories slipped into place
You said,"What have I done?"
You loved that boy,
With every dragon bone.
And there you wept alone,
Your heart started to Break...
Guest chapter 6 . 2/9/2016
I am crying! I am literally sobbing my brains out! Well written besides the fact I want to murder Nightflight, then raise her from the dead and kill her again and again, so Toothless won't be hypnotized anymore! ;'( This chapter is so sad! ;'( tears of sadness!
BTCHPLZ chapter 29 . 8/18/2015
I had been crying like hell cuz i thought hiccup died or some shit then toothless killed nightflight then toothless wont let hiccup get close to him ITS A FUCKING ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS!
Demonic girl111 chapter 28 . 7/21/2015
(Screams in fangirlish delight) AWESOOOOOOOOOOOME!
Demonic girl111 chapter 25 . 7/21/2015
I think the perfect song for Hiccup is "Naughty" from Matilda the Musical.
Demonic girl111 chapter 21 . 7/21/2015
Oh Odin's beard.
Demonic girl111 chapter 15 . 7/21/2015
I just... Wanna... Strangle... This bîtch. (Tries to reach through the screen to grab the female dragons neck, failing miserably)
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