Reviews for Achilles Heel
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *falls over and has a hyper-spasm*
yuMeNami chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
So sweet. :) 333
kirr1001 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Oooh, I loved it. You didn't really overdo it or anything, they both stayed in their characters. Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNN NNNNNNN
THIS WAS GOOD
AND HOT /SHOT
HiddenHero220 chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Me: Aww! Nezumi, you're just too cute sometimes!
Nezumi: Hey! *blushes*
Me: Admit it.
Nezumi: N..no *blushes harder*
Me: Come on, admit it. I won't stop pestering you until you do.
Nezumi: *face bright red* Fine, I admit it. I can be cute sometimes.
Me: *squeal* I knew you would admit it. Hey, Sion, did you get it?
Sion: Yep! *pats video recorder fondly*
Nezumi: *growls* Sion...
*Nezumi chases Sion around the room while I roll on the bed laughing*
TheRedButlerFan chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Ahh!So cute!
kuroneko-sakura chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
OWO e.e hot hot hot hot hot love love love aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah me encantooo
dropdeadez chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Wow! This was absolutely amazing! I love how it's written and I love your choice of words.
PerfidiousSnatch chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Short and Sweet. I loved it.
Azakura chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Awesome. Especially at the end. :D
imperfect-lover chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I am in love with your writing. Please keep writing stories for these two. You're absolutely amazing at conveying them and their feelings. Your fics are the best I've ever come across for these two. I'll probably have read and commented on all of your stories before the week is over haha (It would be sooner if college wasn't suddenly getting so crazy again).
MelodicMadness chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Wow, very beautiful! You did a great job with characterization.
Elegant-Chaos chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Damn. I loved it just as much as I did on DevArt and Tumblr. Now you know I'm truly staking you-I find you on everything!

This is a beautiful fanfiction. I cannot wait to hear more of you from a well loved fandom (of mine, at least).

3 Eternal love and hugs.

-Ec
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
i just love it! so beautifuly well written! and love the intense emotions in here, especially Nezumi thoughts of Sion. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Such lovely work.

Thank you for writing this!
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