|Reviews for The Garter|
| chelldontblink chapter 51 . 1/18
This is the best story that i have ever hade the pleasure of reading. I actualy didnt sleep the last two days so i can read this. Im realy sad this story had to end, but it was good wile it lasted. I recomend this story to anywone who likes ChellDos. Tomorow i am going to find someone to give me grief counselling and cake. I love you :-D
| Zaskina chapter 51 . 10/31/2013
Ahhh man (insert heart here)
Aurgh, I loved this fic (and Strange Bedfellows). I know I'm late to the party in reading it and everything but I wanted to let you know that you have yet another fan amazed at your work :D
(also I saw you have some ATLA and LOK works on your fanfiction too: I will most certainly have to peruse those, as well as your other Portal fics)
Amazing work :D I hope you keep writing, in whatever endeavors you find yourself in!
| Guest chapter 50 . 10/30/2013
if you can't leave them speechless with your intelligence baffle them with you bullshit
| Guest chapter 45 . 10/30/2013
same as the last few chapters... confusing and stupid
| Sith Tzu chapter 51 . 9/18/2013
;_; Just finished reading it... and I don't care about cake or grief counseling... because I'm a real man! Oh who am I kidding... I'll take a huge chocolate cake and all the grief counseling that I can get over the ending of this ChelDoS pairing. FOR SCIENCE!
| Sith Tzu chapter 40 . 9/18/2013
My first review I think for your stories but I have been irreversibly hooked on your works since reading the Toph/Azula femslash months ago and decided to delve into your Portal fanfics... anyway thanks alot for keeping me up for 2 days straight reading you monster! T_T Oh and GLaDOS has made a mistake in grammar so much for super computer mwhaha!
| YuriPrince chapter 51 . 5/25/2013
Loved every bit of it...well except bill and the hobo guy but other wise amazing
| earfluffy chapter 51 . 4/29/2013
This is the problem with really good fics, I never want read anymore of that pairing, because it will be different.
| earfluffy chapter 43 . 4/29/2013
Oh. Thank you for that. I'm so happy right now. You can't believe how happy I am.
| SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 51 . 3/18/2013
... I don't know what to say.
But, thanks for writing.
| SalemTheSpeakerOfTruth chapter 44 . 3/18/2013
Halfway through this chapter, I exited out and said "Nope, fuck this story, how could she do that?"
After a few minutes of sitting there and thinking, I went to my history page, and opened it back up, read a little more, almost closed it again, then typed this.
WHY WOULD SHE FUCK HUCKLEBERRY FINN? WHY WOULD GLADOS FUCK A RANDOM HOBO?
| Pablojcd chapter 51 . 1/25/2013
I was looking around for a good GLaDOS x Chell story and read a couple that were pretty lame and repetitive, but this story is actually one of my favorite books. And I'm not just saying my favorite fanfiction, I'm saying that I love this story the same why I love The Road by Cormac Mcarthy. I read that book 4 years ago and haven't found a better one since than. I'm now going to look through your profile and see if I can find an even better story. Sincerely, a blown away reader.
| Reader chapter 51 . 1/21/2013
Don't wanna burst your bubble, lady, but it looks like you may have some serious issues. Oversexualizing fictitious homicidal robots from video games in such a disturbing detail... But hey, if that sorta thing floats your boat, don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
Now, aside from creeping me out of playing Portal games for the good part of next few weeks (listening to GLaDOS' voice would never be the same again), this one (Bedfellows included) makes an interesting, humorous and rather unique read. Hats off for nailing GLaDOS' witty remarks down to the last byte.
And though I could, for the lack of better words, shut down my disturbance processor and ignore the juicy details of unlikely couple going at it whenever you seemed fit to insert such a thing (don't look at me like that), it would be nice to see something less unsettling from a writer of your caliber.
Subjectivity aside, well done. Such attention to details is something rarely found in fanfiction (and even some of the professional work that should not be named), and the length of paragraps and sentences is just perfect (not too long to lose captivity, not too short to sound stupid). Seriously, well done.
| OpiumPoppy chapter 51 . 1/1/2013
You capture GLaDOS's personality perfectly and I love your Chell so so much. Internally I'm gushing so much over this story and its prequel and I likely will be for the next few days, the difficulty is translating it to coherent text. I absolutely adored all the references to the games you made, especially the mentions of lemons in Strange Bedfellows. You include the cleverest little details that make everything seem so genuine, I'm sure if portal was real that Chell would have an aversion to potatoes and a fascination with engineering programmes that she doesn't understand. Your writing is just beautiful and delicious and this is second time I've spent a whole day just obsessively reading your works. How is one supposed to include a review. How about, 'thank you for gracing the internet with this amazing piece of literary genius'? I think that sums up my feelings nicely. :)
| shtoops chapter 51 . 12/8/2012
This is weirdest shit I've ever read. I fucking love it and need moar. I really hope you make another story because the ending to this didn't feel right. It was just…not very end-y. But you MUST WRITE MOAR. YOU MUST.
Im sitting around sulking because there are so few good ChellDOS fics, so I need more. Do it; do it NAAAUUGH.
It's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey stuff(10th Doctor):