|Reviews for The Garter|
| Random Useless Info chapter 51 . 10/16
O-okay... I gotta say... that... was fucking amazing... I've literally spent the past two days reading the entirety of 'Strange Bedfellows' and 'The Garter' here in full, and holy hell... No joke, this has got to be one of the most well-written and detailed stories I've ever read... The way you portray GLaDOS...
Holy hell I could swear that this was written by the story writers from Valve themselves... And really, I never would have thought that a story about a woman and a former secretary-turned-nearly-omnipotent-supercomputer-AI-in-an-android-body in a romantic (or as romantic as a pair like that could get) would be at all intriguing or, ehehe, dare I say, erotic... But it was both either way and I couldn't have written it better even if I was able to... Overall, just flat-out AMAZING story... Sad to see it end, really ehehe... Even though by now it has been over 3 years, nearly 4...
| haniel0000 chapter 51 . 8/15
Hhhmmmm...hmmmmmmmm...HHHHMMMM... Okay finished reading, now let me tell ya, ya should walk right up to valve and make then publish a book for you, I don't care how, this is awesome, never seen a fic quite like this one and I've been in this site for a few years now... Also, I would like to inform you that altough the Fatima joke was really good, that is an actual name, you should probably know that unless you're a lunatic like the rest of us, but I thought I should've inform you of that anyway.
| Angry Madmoth chapter 13 . 3/1
Keegan's laying down the truth. Brutal-like, too.
I like it.
| Sgt. Mehoff chapter 45 . 11/17/2014
Yeah, that was outrageously stupid. No wonder there are only a couple chapters left.
| fbfbg chapter 51 . 11/12/2014
That was a painful read
| mormel chapter 51 . 9/22/2014
My goodness, I really don't know what to say, but I figure leaving without saying something would be rude after all the effort you put into writing.
I read Strange Bedfellows and The Garter in a couple of sittings, and there is too much going on in my mind to let everything out in a coherent manner, really. But I'll just say that they both were brilliantly written (you really have a knack for coming up with the most hilarious expressions, unexpected comical instances and disturbing cliffhangers), the characters (especially GLaDOS) were portrayed wonderfully and a few wtf-esque chapters in the middle of The Garter aside they were extremely enjoyable to read. Not to mention that the part where Chell fondles GLaDOS' insides (other than the test reward centre, that is) for the first time quite disturbingly induced a major "hot DAMN" reaction in me, being perhaps the best smut-scene I've ever read. If it can be called that, given the context.
So, huge thanks for writing this and all the best for you, whatever it is you're doing nowadays! :)
| Larom chapter 45 . 9/7/2014
The fuck is with this random cheating? Why the random drama in a romance series with almost 100 chapters total? You sure ruined this story and it seems everyone else agrees. What a shitty way to betray the fans of this series...
| Heitomos chapter 44 . 7/14/2014
Well, this story was going pretty well until here. The whole cheating business has completely made me lose interest in the rest of it, and I can't really bring myself to continue reading, knowing that happened. Good 'series' up until this point though.
| Gdamon12x chapter 51 . 7/5/2014
there is nothing I can say to describe this...
its just perfect
| Gdamon12x chapter 28 . 7/2/2014
I'm still not sure what happened from last chapter
I could've sworn Chell raped GLaDOS
but now it sounds like was just an orgasm, and she wasn't used to that
...maybe it was both at the same time?
| Gdamon12x chapter 17 . 6/30/2014
that question was too funny!
you have officially won the internet
| chelldontblink chapter 51 . 1/18/2014
This is the best story that i have ever hade the pleasure of reading. I actualy didnt sleep the last two days so i can read this. Im realy sad this story had to end, but it was good wile it lasted. I recomend this story to anywone who likes ChellDos. Tomorow i am going to find someone to give me grief counselling and cake. I love you :-D
| Zaskina chapter 51 . 10/31/2013
Ahhh man (insert heart here)
Aurgh, I loved this fic (and Strange Bedfellows). I know I'm late to the party in reading it and everything but I wanted to let you know that you have yet another fan amazed at your work :D
(also I saw you have some ATLA and LOK works on your fanfiction too: I will most certainly have to peruse those, as well as your other Portal fics)
Amazing work :D I hope you keep writing, in whatever endeavors you find yourself in!
| Guest chapter 50 . 10/30/2013
if you can't leave them speechless with your intelligence baffle them with you bullshit
| Guest chapter 45 . 10/30/2013
same as the last few chapters... confusing and stupid