Reviews for Gravity Series 3: Smoke & Mirrors
mitzywan chapter 26 . 2/2
I love that each story is different from the previous ones and I'm always down to read more about these incredible, caring, highly skilled, intellegent, and deadly people. I wasn't expecting that their new client would be connected from Edward's past and I despised the way she tried (and failed) to come between Bella and Edward but no one could really break a love as strong as theirs. But I'm glad at how it all turned out at the end and there's more to Kyra's past than meets the eye that caused her to act like that. Superb dynamics between the characters! These group of family and friends will do anything to have each other's backs and I just so love that about them. The kids are hilarious, cute, and soo refreshing! Bethy, Sammy, Caleb, and Sarah are the highlights for me in this story and I am so excited that Mickey's baby girl will add to their cute little group. As always, I'm so in love with this Mercward and Bella, they're both badass and intense with their work and that transfers with the way they love each other. I'm not sure I'm ready to say goodbye to all of themOff to read the 4th one!
WordsMusicMagic chapter 26 . 9/18/2024
I cant tell you how much I love this Edward and Bella and the whole crew. So few stories describe EB parenting and life as a married couple. I love the kiddos, the tough times taken over by the good, family play, and all the mess that comes with Gravity. Thank you so much for another beautiful installment and I hope you keep writing these guys forever. Mooches!
WordsMusicMagic chapter 5 . 9/12/2024
I think Kyra is behind it, to try and get Edward back (not that it will work). Looking forward to the mirror...
WordsMusicMagic chapter 3 . 9/12/2024
I may be a new fan of an older story but I have faith in you!
Syd-Shane22 chapter 7 . 9/4/2024
please ignore my last review im dumb hahaha
Syd-Shane22 chapter 7 . 9/3/2024
i know its been forever but its one of my favorite stories to reread. in this chapter did kyra sleep with someone before edward or was he her first? i dont know why i am just now questioning this lol
karen4honor chapter 26 . 7/2/2024
So very awesome! I'm happy that Obie was brought to his senses without too much "help'! A wonderful ending, all told!
karen4honor chapter 11 . 6/29/2024
Deb, I've always loved your work, and you outdo yourself every time! Much loves and hugs!
karen4honor chapter 9 . 6/29/2024
Yeah, I think Bella's "warning" was justified, and Kyra NEEDED to be brought down a WHOLE BUNCH of pegs, point blank (pardon the pun)!
karen4honor chapter 3 . 6/27/2024
Yes! This will be FUN!
twibrarian88 chapter 11 . 6/5/2024
Deb,

I know this story has been out for awhile and you may not even read comments but I wanted to give you information so that you can correct the information about Kyra's Dad's death.

If a diabetic's blood sugar is low, they need to take glucose, which comes in a gel or a tablet, or another sugary thing to raise it. (A lot of diabetics use orange juice, as it works quickly.) Insulin lowers blood sugar, so it would only be taken if someone's blood sugar had risen too much.

Thanks for a wonderful story - It's after midnight and I can't put it down!

- Deb VanAntwerp
saintfudge chapter 25 . 4/29/2024
Thanks again still a great read ..have fun
white wolf chapter 25 . 12/27/2023
I have read a lot of Bella and Edward stories that are on fan-fiction but I must say that your's are some of the best out there. I can't tell you how many times I come back and read them again and again. They are really great. I want to say thank you, thank you, thank you to you and all the writers who put your work on-line for every one who likes to read and for the ones who can't or won't write them selves. Please continue to write when ever you can and for as long as you want. Take care and God Bless You Always,
EdwardsVampTramp chapter 10 . 11/23/2023
I gripped Bethy by the overall straps and lifted her up level to her mother's face. "I found this outside. Should we keep her?" I asked, smirking at Bethy's giggle.'

It's so minor, but I always remember this scene when I think about this story. It's sweet, funny, and their family unit in a nutshell. One of my favorites from this series.
*swoon
BethMasenCullen chapter 26 . 9/29/2023
Amazing from start to finish... I'm so glad I am rereading these!
3,472 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »