Reviews for The Trouble with friends
im ur misconception chapter 1 . 4/1
awww weird take but very cute.
Stormfoedt chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Nawww. Okay, so I might enjoy writing a lot, but reviewing has always been a tad iffy. Well sue me for being bad at constructive criticism. I like the story, and that is that. It's sweet, simple and very straight forward. I COULD say something about grammar, but the way I see it, the grammar is good, and if anything was to be spotted it can probably be blamed on some shitty keyboard.

Best regards, Stormfoedt
GoldenRoseTanya chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
woohoo loved it go chris
fairylord chapter 2 . 1/15/2012
it was nice story about nalu and i can't wait for next chapter
Shinigami-Mercury chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
KKKKKKKYYYYYYYAAAAAAA! XD XD XD

I LOVED IT! IT WAS AWESOME! I HAVE NO OTHER WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT'S COMPLETE AWESOMENESS! XD XD XD
Unrequited Love 143 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Soooo cute and fluffy *U* I'm not used to the

"romantic-ish" side of Natsu, but whatever. Still uber uber cute that it was squeezing my heart x)
AngelKnightKaoru chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
You should make a sequal though, i love the idea of jealous Natsu xDDD Please make a sequel!
hikariep chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
siento que la trama es buena pero la personalidad de los personajes no concuerdan con los originales.

ps: intenta hacer fanfic mas largos.(hubiera sido genial un enredo entre lucy x gray o loke)
Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
That is so cute.
xXGrayGuitar14Xx chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Good story ;)
alliriana chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
EEEEEE! Sooo cute I loved it! You wrote it soo brilliantly DX so cute, well done!

moremoremoremore!:3
Meliodas007 chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Aww that was so sweet. Natsu is so cute when he is jealous and violent. _"