|Reviews for Alternate Pathway|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Rather short for a chapter dontcha think?
| Keeralie Starflight chapter 11 . 10/22/2013
You're alive! And this is an AMAZING chapter! So Moss survives, and Broom is alive too? YES! Keep up the good work! :)
| Keeralie Starflight chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
This is not terrible, it's great! Don't ever tell yourself it's terrible, cause if you're like me at all you'll quit working on it, and nobody wants that!
| Keeralie Starflight chapter 8 . 2/15/2013
OK, that was really good too. i do like the creative way you're weaving their stories together. OK, that sounded really Cowslipishly weird!
| Keeralie Starflight chapter 6 . 2/15/2013
You are a seriously creative person! I never even considered Blackberry with anyone else. Shows what's important to me, i guess. I like the idea, honestly. Keep up the awesome work!
| Keeralie Starflight chapter 2 . 2/15/2013
OK, you asked for a review, and here's an honest one: I like how you've shown the aftermath of The Homecoming, and it's affect on different rabbits, I think you portray the characters feelings well. I am expecting a dark plot to come, and I respect that, I've got tricks up my own sleeves... My only gripe, so to speak, is the character death early on, but that does give warning that we shouldn't expect a fluffy story. I like this story immensely so far!
| Keeralie Starflight chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Cool! A Watership show fic I haven't read! (Jumps up and down screaming) Yessssss!
| ShadyPegasister chapter 5 . 1/15/2013
Ah, I always wondered how she got that bite in her ear...
| ShadyPegasister chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
I'm assuming that by Virthrul you are referring to Vilthuril from the book. Glad you are bringing in some of the book characters. I don't think the all caps was necessary when Blackberry snapped, but you are doing a good job with the fic and not neglecting the effects of it all on the does. I also wondered how Blackberry fell so deeply for Campion in such a short time, but I suppose that's TV for you. Plus they are rabbits so maybe she was in season? I like the little background stories about Captain Broom. Gives the story some depth. Enjoyable fic.
| Embemxrabbit chapter 10 . 11/4/2012
Glad you're back! :D aw that's so cute (everything except the fight scene! :0)
| Embemxrabbit chapter 9 . 3/28/2012
I really like your El- ahrairah story, it was really creative and very well written and a really good idea...
Virthful and Fiver are so cute together and Hawkbit and Bigwig's relationship is just funny.
I'll review at your next chapter again ;)
| Bluebell-Rah chapter 8 . 2/18/2012
Okay, I do think that's a good idea.
Oh and quick thing, next time we get to spend more time with Vrithrul and Fiver.
| Embemxrabbit chapter 8 . 2/18/2012
wow... such interesting ideas! fiver and silverweed's fight though all in his head, I loved the smart replies that Cowslip used such as " stop all this heroic nonsense" ! lol! the only not totally positive thing i have to say is, wen ur making someone new speak take a new line, this is NOT negitive it is merly to make this story easier to read and thanks for putting this up for everyone to see... well done ;)
| Embemxrabbit chapter 7 . 2/17/2012
interesting... very interesting... hrakamarli* i like your new ( polite ) swearword lol and quite an idea too, about turning two Watershippers against their friends in a way ;) aww poor Fiver hope he's okay :/
| Embemxrabbit chapter 6 . 2/14/2012
I like the way you brought that together, what with blackberry and blackavar comforting each other, even though i love the blackberry x campion pairing this dosn't seem to be working too bad ;)
will moss become a true spy for the watership downers? guess we'll have to wait and see... well done and long forward to nxt time.