Reviews for Rainbows
singing like blue chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Oh my god, the text and the format was so beautiful, Rae! I really loved it, it was amazing, and, even though I'm never good at understanding poetry, this was amazing and I understood it completely.

Hope to see you in a few years as a poet.

this SHIP of FOOLS chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
It's so beautiful! This peice of writing. I loved the line about the kaleidoscope. And the line about Teddy's hair. It was discriptive and the imagery in this poem was amazing!
keep my issues drawn chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This was absolutely adorable, Rae! I love your freeverse writing skill, it's absolutely amazing. I don't really ship this pairing anymore, but I still absolutely loved this freeverse. you've obviously got great understanding of what to use in a freeverse to make it a freeverse, so well done! Great job! :D
WeasleySeeker chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
This is beautiful, Rae! I love that you've got such a vivid image for each colour, and it seems to flow between each one so perfectly, and that it fits in with Teddy's Metamorphmagusness (yes that's a word... now...). And also I love Teddy/Victoire :D Keep writing!
MagicGirl41 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
THAT WAS AMAZING! I'm getting really sick of all the unhappy broken hearted Vic Teddy/Lily pairings I've been getting. Thankyouthankyouthamkyou SO MUCH for posting! You made me happy again :D
sydneysages chapter 1 . 12/4/2011


(even though it's not for me)


This is oh so well written, so well formatted, so beautiful - the images are just so vibrant and stand out so well. I love how you've written it & the vocab you've used simply because it's amazing.

I also like the repeating of "like a kaleidoscope of colour" and also the spanish question question marks (you know, the ones tehy put at the beginning of a question) which was awesomesauce!

Love it!

&hearts xxx
felines chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I like how you go through each color with such vividness, Rae! It's really creative, this freeverse, and I loved this!

Also, not sure if you noticed, but Livvi's penname is erased. :)
shimmeringbubbles chapter 1 . 11/29/2011

it's pretty :)

I like how you describe every rainbow colour.
brahdley jims chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Rae, I love it! The kaleidoscope of colour, and how you went down the colours of the rainbow. 'Not quite wildflower violet', and 'when she shysmiles' beautiful. and adorable.

Thank you so much, and merry Christmas. :P